Ascendant Rising
Book One: Exodus War
By Skygunner58203
Disclaimer and Authors Note. I do not own several different franchises. These include: Macross, Harry Potter, Bionic Commando, Skies of Arcadia, or any others I may have forgotten to mention. However, the character Sora Hyrin among others are mine. I have taken elements of several shows/books and strung them together in a way that is, I hope, unique. Events known as canon in several areas may have been changed to suit my story. This will be the only dislaimer i put up in this story. I shouldn't need to repeat myself over and over again.
Also this is NOT beta'ed. I don't even really know what a beta does. If anyone can fill me in that would be great. Heck, if I like the idea I may ask for one or two.
I have a basic timeline of events hand written down to help keep me on track in what i hope to be a rather long attempt at fanfiction. Below is a basic rundown of events leading up to the story.
Timeline of Events in storyline history: July 29, 1980 Sora Hyrin born to Hylian father and Meltraedi mother on desert world of Kharak (old Hylian word for Prison) Mother dies in childbirth. Father died during Hylian civil war. Adopted by Saotome family of Macross Frontier fame. Raised alongside Alto Saotome and taught Kabuki.
July 31, 1980 Harry Potter born to James and LIly Potter.
Oct 31, 1981 Voldemort defeated by Harry Potter, James and Lily declared dead though Lily's body was never found. HP sent to Dursleys per normal. Events up until Hogwarts the same as Canon.
Hogwarts: Harry Potter meets Hermione Granger first, thereby changing history as we know it. Both are sorted Ravenclaw. Several Events (canon) sow distrust in Dumbledore. Primary Trio is Harry, Hermione, and Tracey Davis of Slytherin.
August 1993 Sora/Alto rebel against family and join the military academy as Valkyrie pilots. Both excel in courses taken. Sora also takes on training in Magical/non-Magical combat.
December 1993 Second Civil war begins. Hyrin loses left arm and both lower legs in training accident. Chosen to take bart in new Bionics program. Ends war single-handedly two months later. Given the nickname of Bionic Commando, BC for short.
May 1994 Hylians finish construction of first long range FTL colony ship, the Frontier. Sora/Alto fast-tracked through remaining training and transferred to crew. One week after launch, Frontier and a few military vessels are all that remain of the Hylian race. Kharak destroyed by unknown alien race.
May 1995 - End of Hogwarts 4th year Voldemort resurrected - Harry wins tournament, Cedric dead (Canon)
September 1995 - Hogwarts fifth year starts Canon. Frontier develops new prototype jump drives specifically for fighters. Designed with locator beacons in case of emergency.
Story begins in November on board Frontier
Sora Hyrin is an original character I actually designed for the Rifts pen and paper RPG. He has long blood-red hair held in a style similar to Alto's. Eyes are a crystal green in color. His build is only a little bulkier, but this is due to lugging around an extra 200 lbs of metal all the time. He tends to learn languages very quickly and excels in combat due to his rather unique fighting style. Slow to anger but once there, is very difficult to calm down. Takes racial slurs very seriously (HATES them) as he was discriminated against due to his bionics.
I will appreciate any reviews good or bad. I like hearing about whether I'm doing a good job or not. Suggestions are also welcome. For info on what his bionics look like, google images for bionic commando for his arm. For his lower legs, look for images of Vent from megaman zx advent.
Now....On with the show. Please read, review, and most of all...Enjoy.
Skygunner58203
