Review: This is the story of a new enemy here we see the enemy and how he reacts to Yoh.
DISCLAIMER: There are only 2 original characters in this chapter Atos and his spirit of darkness and Ken with his spirit of wind they are both my characters medio middle if you are wondering the meaning of the word before middle the meaning is middle only that the word is in Spanish
Chapter one: A new enemy appears
In the process of getting to Dobby village were the shaman tournament is going to be held Yoh and the others appeared to be in a dessert. Everyone was exhausted from walking and from the hot sun of the dessert.
Anna-It is important that we get to Dobby village as soon as possible.
Yoh-Oh relax Hannah we already have clues for the location of Dobby village and besides we need a break from walking.
Anna- Do you think that the tournament is going to wait for us?
Morty-Anna if we don't get a break we'll die of thirst and hunger.
Anna-Alright, let's rest and eat some lunch.
An hour later they finish eating lunch and they are getting ready to leave there resting place. When suddenly a huge darkness surrounds Yoh and the others. They all prepare for and unexpected fight.
Anna-This is the power of a very strong shaman. I'll take care of this 10 bold necklace out she calls spirits of lights saying: Spirits of light bring your power where there is darkness illuminate this place. Now come with me and be my spirit servant.
Yoh- Amidamaru into the sword of light.
Jun-Look at the peak of the mountain.
Len-And who in Gods name are you? There where 6 figures on the mountain and only the man in the middle was the only one they could see he had long black hair and wore a black tunic
Man-That was impressive Anna you showed and immense strategy calling light spirits and then capturing them you are very skillful. And you Yoh, didn't expect you to be this strong. I see that you have a great amount of spirit energy and spirit control.
Yoh-Who are you?
Man-My name is Atos Vandraft and 'I am the keeper of the Shaman Secret'
Len-I don't care if you are the prince of Egypt. Balson attack.
Atos-Ken take care of this, the others come with me. Darkness covers the 6 men and only and only 1 was leftLen's attack missed because of the darkness. Yoh attacks the man that was left with a 'celestial slash' and it was a direct hit. But when the smoke clear the man had disappeared and nobody could see him. Then he appeared falling from the sky, hitting Trey. After that Ken scream 'wind pressure' and directed it to Yoh but Yoh at the last second said 'armor'. Yoh managed to block part of the attack because the shield broke. Trey took Ken by surprise and did his 'icicle attack' and Len his 'multiple attacks' making a double combo. But for some reason this double combo did little damage.
Trey-I don't understand, it doesn't matter how many attacks we throw at him, and we made very little damage.
Anna-That's because his spirit controls the wind he can make the wind around him soften your attacks. You have to make a very powerful attack to make a lot of damage.
I hope you liked the first chapter, I now it wasn't all that. But, I had to explained the different things so you will take an idea of the setting and so you knew the new evil and an idea of there powers. I'll like that you send me reviews telling me what to add or what things should I make better. I'll especially like the reviews of my friends and you telling me what you think of the story.
