I was not happy with the story so I have started over. I have change the first chapter and double checked so spelling. I hope it will be better.

Eragon and Saphira were flying as fast as they could. They needed to get to Arya before she suffered to much. They had been flying ever since the Grey Folk sent them back to the time Arya was captured by Durza. Eragon knew that he tortured her for a couple hours before he took her to Gil'ead. He already had a plan. Saphira would drop him off short of their destination and Eragon would sneak up and shot Durza in the heart. Once he was dead he would hopefully convince the Urgals to leave. Arya was the first to save.

They had a chance to save all those that had been lost and also retrieve the emerald egg so the could present it to Arya. They were told it would hatch for her. Eragon and Saphira were to then start training her to be a Dragon Rider. The problem was going to be Arya. She did not have any idea Eragon and her were very close friends that fell in love with the other. Eragon was not sure how to get her to travel with him. He knew he would have to tell her he was from two years in the future. They finally arrived where Saphira would drop him off.

ExA

Arya was tied so that she was standing up. Durza had tied her between two trees by her wrist. He then cut her top off before he started wiping her. As many times has he wiped her on her back or chest she refused to tell him where she sent the egg. She also refused to cry out in pain. She did not know how long she stood there being tortured before she felt a presents reach out to her mind. It was not trying to break threw her shields but was caressing it asking her to let in who ever it was reaching out for her. They were also trying to send her some energy. She lowered her barriers just enough to see who was trying to contact her. "Arya, hold on just a few more minute. I am almost there.' she heard in the ancient language. She did not know who it was but she would hold on long enough.

ExA

Using the spells he learned Eragon bent the light around him and covered his smell and noise. Slowly creeping up to where Durza and the Urgals had Arya. It took about 30 minutes to arrive. What he saw made him see red. He could not believe Arya was tied between two trees half naked being tortured. Eragon slowly pulled back and arrow and aimed at Durza's back. Eragon had been lucky enough to be behind the Shade with the Urgals off to the side.

When he was aimed at the spot that would allow the arrow to pierce the hart he released to arrow and watched it hit its mark. As soon has the arrow struck Eragon dropped his bow and rushed in to the clearing. He placed himself between Arya and the Urgals.

Arya heard the arrow hit and Durza cry out has he died. She did not see who fired the arrow or where from but she felt relieved all the same. It wasn't a few seconds later she saw the back of someone off to her left. He had a sword in hand and was facing the Urgals.

Eragon lifted his chin in a sighed of respect then called out. "Do any of you speak basic?"

A large Urgal step forward. "I do elf."

"I have freed you and all you race that has been enslave by the Shade. I do not want to have to kill you also, so I ask that you leave and return to your homes." Eragon was not sure what would happen next.

"Big words elf."

"That may be so but I will defend the elf behind me with my life if need be but I promise none of you will live to further harm her."

Arya did not know the elf that saved her that she could tell. She needed out of these binds so that she can make sure the egg made it to Brom.

"Elf we will leave you to the female elf and return home. You have done a great service freeing us from the Shade. Your deed will be song for all of time or till the last Urgal has fallen. What is your name?" "I have been known by several names but too the Urgals I've known I have been known as Firesword."

With that Eragon said "Brisingr" and his sword lit up in blue flame.
"What is your name?"

"Tarok"

"Tarok if you see Nar Garzhvok of the Bolvek tribe. Let him know when I get time I would like to meet with him and deuces peace between the Urgralgra and the other races."

"I will Firesword" and with that all the Urgals left.

With that Eragon sighed with relief. He turned to Arya and wanted to hurt someone but he needed to concentrate on healing her.

"Arya Drottingu I am sorry I could not get hear sooner."

Arya was to tired to answers. She was barely able to stand as it was. Behind Arya, Saphira came out in to the open. Eragon could tell she was furious at what happen but he did not have time for her to go out and hunt down the Urgals. That and he needed them alive.

'Saphira I know you are angry but we need to take care of Arya first. Durza is dead. Eragon walked over and got a blanket and a water skin from Saphira's saddle. He laid the blanket down behind Arya and walked around to the front of her keeping his eyes looking up to her face.

"Arya with your permission I am going to hold you up so I can cut the ropes and free you."

Arya just nodded. Eragon wrapped one arm around her trying to avoid any injuries. Once he had her secured he cut one rope then another. He lowered her to the blanket. Arya felt the relief in her arms and wrist.

Eragon knelt beside her still looking into her eyes. "Arya I have some water I am going to pore over your wounds and clean them so I can then heal you. I'm sorry but I will need to look in order to make sure I get everything."

Arya just nodded. Eragon then started cleaning her wounds then healed them. Once he was done with her front he helped her turn over and healed her back.

"Thank you."

"I was glad I could get here before he could do more. I'm sorry about the deaths of Glenwing and Faolin. I wish I could have save them as well but it was impossible."

Arya felt the pain of the lose of her friends but she could see the regret in his eyes that he could not help them also.

"Who are you and how did you find me?"

"I will tell you. It is a long story so I ask that you wait till you have eaten and rested. I will go and find you some food. Saphira here will watch over you till I get back."

At this Arya turned around and notice the dragon behind her. 'I must be more tired then I thought if I did not notice a dragon.'

"You are a rider?"

"Yes, one that only you know about. I promise I will tell you everything you need to know" he replied in the ancient language.

Arya knew he would tell her but it would have to wait. "Very well but I will hold you to your promise." With that Eragon left to find food for Arya and him.

Saphira moved around so Arya could see her better. "Greetings Arya."
"Greetings Saphira. I am honored to meet you."

"Get some sleep Little Elf, I will watch over you." With that Arya scrummed to her exhaust. Saphira laid beside her and covered her with a wing till Eragon returned.

Arya woke up later smelling something cooking. She notice she was covered with a blanket and there was shirt laying beside her. When she looked around she found the rider with his back to her cooking over a fire. Arya got up and put the large shirt on. Once she was covered she sat across the fire from the rider. She did not see his dragon.

Eragon notice her looking around. "She went off hunting. Are you feeling any better?"

"Yes I am thank you."

Eragon nodded and said "The stew is about done. Once we eat I will tell you about myself and Saphira. I ask that you listen with an open mind because what I am going to tell you, you will have a hard time believing."

Eragon looked over at Arya. He knew how to reader her some. She had always been good at hiding her emotions and thoughts. She had her blank face that she used to hid her thoughts so he had no idea what she might be thinking.

"What you tell me that you don't think I will believe."

"You would be surprised. Here eat then we will talk."

He handed her a bowl of stew. They both sat and quietly ate. Once they were done Eragon took the bowls to a stream and washed them. He sat back by the fire. Taking a deep breath Eragon started his tail.

"Saphira and I are from two years in the future." Eragon looked at her and saw the disbelief in her eyes. "I know you don't believe me and probable think I'm off in the head but I assure you it is the truth."

Arya wanted to believe him because he had saved her and treated her with respect while healing her. "You can see why I might have a problem believing you."

"You would not be the Arya I have come to know if you took my word with out some sort of proof."

"You say you know me but I do not remember you. Also how is it that no one but myself even knows about you?"

"The reason I told you that it was impossible for me to save your two companions. The reason why is Saphira came from the egg you carried. We appeared the moment you tried to send the egg to Brom. Brom who helped you forge the agreement between the Varden and the Elves on the egg you carried."

Arya was surprised he knew where she sent the egg. "Lets say for now I will give you the benefit of the dough. I will hear your story and past judgment afterwards."

Eragon then started by telling her his life in Carverhall as a child. He went on to tell her how he was out hunting when Saphira's egg appeared. Told her how he had tried to sell it which lead to the Ra'zac discovering where it was and his Uncles death because of that. He went over his travels with Brom. Seeing her in his dreams and Brom's death. Told her of his capture and her rescue. He let her know what he knew of her imprisonment, torture and near rape. He told her about their escape to Farthen Dur. His worry for her because she had not woken up even though he had healed her. He told her about him reaching out to her mind and her telling him how to find the Varden. He went over his stay with the Varden the battle of Farthen Dur. Her saving his life when he was about to be killed by Durza. His crippling injury. About this time Saphira arrived back and helped him with his story. Including the test he had to perform and the duel between the two.

They took a break after that and ate dinner since it was getting late. "Eragon I would like to thank you for saving me from having to go threw that at Gil'ead."

"I would never let you go threw that again. Arya you became my closes friend over the last year before I came back. Before that you were one of the few elves that excepted me as Saphira's rider."

Arya did not know what to say to that. She was sure he was leaving some things out. She decided to wait to ask some of the questions she had. After they ate Eragon with some help from Saphira continued the tale.

Eragon wet over the trip to Ellesmera his stay there and some of the training. Told her about the Blood Oath Celebration and his change. He told her she returned to the Varden the next day and that they would not run into each other for another few months. They went over what happen during the battle of the Burning Plains, the Red Rider, Eragons short disappearance. Eragon hearing he was the son of Morzan. Reuniting with Ronan and Katrina's rescue. Eragon could tell she was not happy when he told of his staying behind. Though Saphira did jump in with her and Nasuada were not happy before he left. Saphira went on to tell Arya upon her learning of this took off for the Empire to find Eragon. Eragon shop Saphira a dirty look for that. They talked about the battle of Feinster and Arya becoming a Shadeslayer. They talked about the battle of Belatona, the Dauthdaert, Eragons injury. They talked about Eragons training on the way to Dras-Leona. The siege of the city. Eragon told her how they entered the city, their captor, escape and seizing of the city. Eragon told her about Nasuada and Eragon, Saphira and Arya's attempt to rescue her. Saphira reminded Eragon of what he was doing when Nasuada was captured. Eragon talked about him, Glaedr and Saphira's trip to Vroengard. How after finding the Vault of Souls and discovering of his true name how a member of the Grey Folk appeared and sent him and Saphira back.

When Eragon was done he picked up a stick and poked the fire waiting on Arya to say something. Arya sat there thinking about what she heard. She was sure Eragon left a lot out. She didn't know what all to ask but she had one question she wanted an answers to first.

"What do you have planned?"

So the redo of the first chapter of this story. I hope you enjoy the story better. I will stick with some things but will change others.