Hey Wolves', anyone who has already read this is probably yelling at me to upload new chapters and not simply change things around, unfortunately i had to start fixing things so that they would mesh better with what i had planned...also i wanted a bit more realism in a few ways.

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"The Destruction and Vandalism of UNSC property will not be tolerated, am I Understood" The leader of the squad yelled as he assessed the line of soldiers in front of him. It brought him great joy to see some of the newer recruits shake in fear as he walked past them.

"Sir yes Sir" The line stood tall even though some looked genuinely scared, some shaking and some pale with wide eyes as he met them.

"Good, I will only say this once and it better stick or I will break my foot off in your ass and p.t you until you Fucking Die. Now stand tall and suck it up, you are almost ODST units now, the pride and joy of the UNSC, and any mischievous behavior will be counted against you in the glorious formation of the 34th ODST Battalion". Silence swept through the small squad that was assembled

"You will refer to me as Gunnery Sergeant Onyx and I will be leading you recruits into a live combat drop today and I will do my damned best to bring you all back alive or dead."

He promptly turned to the rest of the squad "Now suit up we have an operation planet side in 20 minutes, hustle up ODSTs we don't get paid for nothing."

"Sir, yes, Sir" the recruits yelled as they all hustled to their lockers and started suiting up for the drop while others started weapon maintenance.

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Tony watched the new bloods strap on their gear as quickly as they could with their green as grass skills, chuckling to himself as one of the recruits strapped her chest armor on too tight and started making exaggerated motions as she tried to rip off the offending article and had to get a veteran to help her loosen the straps before she crushed herself…Private Barrett if he was correct.

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"Alright ODST's we have a V.I.P signal that started up again this week, intelligence says it's a column of brutes moving around the ONI building in New Mombasa, they have been milling around Kizingo Boulevard and we have been tasked with getting a visual on them and seeing if they have any items of importance, whether it be mechanized or infantry". Glances around the room showed they understood the basis of the mission and he could continue to assign roles to the troopers.

"Snipers will be deployed with Sergeant Jules Bolo, CQC with Corporal Connie Learon, and standard operators will be with me. After this mission you will all have been tested by battle and be sent to your permanent stations on other UNSC vessels as reliable operators with hands on experience".

"Remember ODST's feet first and drag 'em down to hell"

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So that is my second revised chapter for this rewrite, hopefully it is better than the original and it grabs more views