Hey guys! This is my first story, so…tell me what I need to fix, and I'll try my best!
I, Edward Elric, and my brother, Alphonse Elric, were finally heading back home. I had three years worth of research, and some of it I had already shown Al. But we had plenty of time to go over it later, anyway. Al had shown me some alkahestry he learned from Mei, a Xingese girl he'd befriended on our long journey. He'd gone East, while I'd gone West on our latest journey, so we had quite a catching up to do. Most importantly, I had to come back to Winry. It was hard to communicate long-distance, so we rarely sent letters. But I loved her, and she loved me, so it was time to come back. Besides, my automail needed some major repairs. I'd run into a lot of trouble, either trying to keep some people from ruining a village, or defending myself from some really weird creatures over there in the West.
At the doorstep, I fumbled with my keys for a minute before inserting it into the keyhole and pushing open the door. "Surpri-", I started, before I took in the scene before me. The first thing I saw was some random guy, practically laying on top of Winry. However, their heads were close together, too close to be talking. Actually, they were…kissing. Urgently, by the looks of it. And…he was also an automail patient, since he was missing the bottom half of his left arm. The port fitted right below his elbow, but it seemed to be a little bent, somehow. That was probably why he was there.
"Uh-hmm," I cleared my throat, and the guy jumped off, started. Winry looked up, and her eyes widened. "Ed?! Al?! Wh-how-I wasn't expecting you guys!" Then she quickly came over and gave us just as quick hugs, and…waited. "Well…I'll go unpack, I guess," I said, and ran up the stairs before anything could get even more awkward. My eyes burned, but I didn't dare cry just 'cause of this. "Brother, wait!" Al stomped up the stairs after me, and soon caught up since my automail wasn't working too well.
"Brother…" Al whispered, but I ignored him and laid on my bed. How could she? I thought she'd wait for me. I angrily punched my pillow, and a bit of stuffing flew out. "Whoops," I muttered, and Al sighed across the room. A million questions and accusations flew through my head, but I finally settled on one that I NEEDED to ask Winry. "Are you happy being with him?" I muttered into my ripped up pillow.
Okay, so there's the first chapter. I'm not exactly sure if I should continue it, but…if I do get some reviews of encouragement…*hint, hint* then I'll keep continuing!
Oh yeah, PLEASE no flames. PLEASE, PLEASE!
