Me: Now this something I have bee working on for a while and I've rewriten this three times and a finally happy with ths beginning. I wanted to write more, but I'm having writer's block again, so I thought I'd publish what I had. Next update will have more content. And yes, I'm using human names, as I always seem to do. As for my Hetalia/Doctor Who crossover, I need to get cracking on that. Don't worry, I'll get that done as soon as I can.

Max: And she does own Hetalia or Maximum Ride.

Me: What are you doing here? Your not even in this story, sadly.

Max: Gazzy blew a hole through the forth wall. Thought I come and check out what it's like back here.

Me: Well, there's not much here. Also, SOMEONE FIX THAT HOLE! WE DON'T ANYTHING LIKE ERASERS COMING THROUGH, DO WE?


A flash of light, that's how it all started and the nations were thrown into the unknown world.

Alice landed on top of Amelia as they crashed into an alleyway off of some side street. Alice immediately got off Amelia and brushed herself off.

"What the hell did you do?" Amelia said pulling herself off the ground. "Was that supposed to happen, or did you mess up again?" She looked down at herself. "Oh crap, I'm a fricking teenager. Like a fourteen year old teenager. And I'm wear something totally different from what I was wearing before. And you too! What the frick happened with that spell?"

"I did not mess up!" Alice said. "Okay, I did, again. But something interfered with my spell. This was not supposed to happen at all. I don't know what I did wrong. What happened before we ended up here?"

Amelia shook her head. "I don't really remember. You were going to show me a spell, for what reason, I forgot, and I had a book in my hands. I wish I could remember what book I had. Then I can't remember the rest."

"Maybe that book you had was what caused the spell to go completely." Alice said sighing. "If only you weren't so blonde as to forget so much."

"Oh look who's talking Miss. Blondie Pig Tails." Amelia said crossing her arm. Alice frowned and rolled her eyes.

"Look, let's just try to figure out where and when we are." Alice said.

"Do you think anyone else got pulled through like we were?" Amelia asked. "I mean, it would sort of logical, right?"

"With my bad luck, most likely." Alice said shaking her head. "Why do most of my spells go haywire? Some they back fire onto me or someone else who I didn't intend to hurt, it doesn't work at all, or, like in this case, it does something completely different from what I wanted it to do. Why do I even bother anymore?"

"Because it's fun and sometimes it actually works." Amelia said putting a hand on her shoulder. "Besides, it can't that bad. Now come on!" She grabbed onto Alice's arm and dragged her out into the street. There was a Starbucks on their right and a cute little clothing boutique to their left. They walked over to a small newspaper stand and found out where they were. "L.A! Were in Los Angeles!"

The guy at the newspaper stand gave them a sideways look and shook his saying "crazy teens". Amelia shrugged. "Now to find out what…" She was cute off by some cute looking dark haired guys eating the Starbucks. They were wearing sunglasses and had the sweetest, most perfect voices. Almost as if they had the voices of angels. "Hotties." She said as walked over to go flirt with them.

"Oh god I think I might know where we are." Alice said running after Amelia, trying to stop her.


Me: Yeah, I know it sucks, but I finally wanted to get this published. It'll get better, I promise.

Max: By the way, a guy named Arthur Kirkland came over saying he was going to make scones or something.

Me: Oh dear god! Someone get him away from the stove!

Max: How bad could he be? It's not like I'm cooking.

Me: He has about same cooking skills as you. He burns everything.

Max: O_O