Okay, this is my first story ever, so I'll be open for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Okay, here it goes...3...2...1! ACTION!
"Are you serious about this arrangement Pain?" An enraged brunette barges in on the Akatsuki leader, who looks up from some paperwork, annoyance obvious in his face, which is soon masked by his usual stare. He looks at the young girl, impassive, with her left hand on a cocked hip, as she points over her shoulder with her thumb.
A slinky figure sidles up behind her, a conceited smirk sliding across thin lips as he looks down upon her, wrapping an arm around her shoulders. "Aaah, come on sweet heart. I ain't that bad now..." A lip curls in disgust as she picks his arm from around her shoulders gingerly, hoping to not catch a disease. "Pleeease." She shoves the virile man out of the door way as he tries to push her against the door itself. "YOU'RE ALLOWING HIM TO DO THAT!" She points at the violet-eyed demon as a haughty gleam takes root in his eyes, and Pain just folds his hands, putting his elbows on his desk before him, resting his chin on them, gazing at the girl placidly. "You're letting him do that? To me, your little sister!"
The silver-haired fiend steps forward again, this time eyeing the girl like she was a trophy of some sort. Pain slowly looks at him, but his penetrating eyes don't bother the Jashinist as he stares back pointedly. He takes in a sigh as Pain looks back to his sister, and he nods. "It's only for a while, Rin." "But P-" He raises his hand, silencing her. "Plus, this is for the trouble you caused me last week, running about like an unrestrained animal." The flamboyant young woman crosses her arms, rolling her eyes, and mumbles out of the side of her mouth.
"I was fine...Okibi was with me." "And what if he wouldn't have been?" She completely ignores the question, and instead, brings up the one at hand. "I'll take anyone; Deidara, Kakuzu, Kisame, even Zetsu, for crying out loud, as my 'baby-sitter'," she makes quotation marks with her fingers, "anyone, except for him!" She doesn't even dare to glance at him as he leans against the wall, waiting for dismissal. "It's going to stay this way, until you learn to control yourself." Pain returns to the files on his desk, shuffling through them until he finds the one he had before Rin barged in. "Leave me please."
Her sapphire eyes widen in shock, and she sighs, knowing that her elder is now completely immersed in his work. Much to her despise, she hears a satisfied chuckle emanate from that loathsome man as she turns around, sauntering out of Pain's office as he follows her, closing the door with much enthusiasm. He snakes up behind her, putting his lips as close as he can to her ears. "Told ya." "Shut up asshole." She puts more umph into her walk, and gets a few measly meters in front of him before she reaches her door.
She takes a firm hold of the handle, and gets midway of turning it, when his hand grasps her own, stopping her. "He said I was to watch you at all times." Rin's hair falls in front of her eyes as she glances up at his towering figure. He's smirking with delight as she shoves him away again. "My room is my room. I do have my rights, you pig." And with that declaration, she opens her door, rushes in, and slams it in his face. Kakuzu happened to be rounding the corner when the door slams, and he raises a questioning eyebrow at his compadre. Hidan's lip curls into a half smirk, and he raises his chin slightly. "She digs me."
On the other side of the door, Rin stands against it, listening to Hidan and Kakuzu walk away, and she slides down the door, her butting hitting the ground. She curls her knees up, bringing them to her chest, and she runs her hands through her hair. "Why does he have to be such an arrogant ass!" Shaking her head, she slowly stands up, and goes to her bed, throwing herself upon it. She lets out a haggard sigh, and sits up, unzipping her cloak, and she lies back down, not caring to throw it on the floor, and lets it hang off the side of her bed. Kicking off her sandals, she shimmies out of her shirt, and lets it fall from her hands as she takes in a deep breath, leaning against the wall. Her hands go to her face, trying to fight back the exhaustion that will inevitably overtake her.
Closing her eyes, she imagines herself tomorrow, bickering at Hidan's antics as he watches the 18 year-old hellion. "He just won't learn, will he...?" Letting out a short, exasperated breath, she lies down, and imagines herself running from Hidan tomorrow, racing with Okibi through the woods as he calls out after her. Turning on her left side, facing the wall, Rin takes hold of the covers, and curls into a tight ball, her eyes becoming heavy with fatigue, and soon, her breathing is rhythmic and low, letting her fall into hazy dreams.
"HEY!" A loud banging issues upon Rin's door, and she grumbles under her breath. "What the hell! I was asleep in the mountains with Itachi, you ass!" She rubs her eyes, kicking the sleep from her body as she looks at her clock on the wall. "It's freaking 7:30 in the morning, you jerk!" She throws her pillow at her door with a loud thud, and dives under the covers as it opens, revealing a smirking Hidan. "Time to wake up, your bro said."
He steps over the pillow and strides over to the bed, leaning over her with one hand on the wall. Peeking from under the covers, her eyes appear over the edge, and a smirk of pure smugness slips across his lips. "Good morning, sweet heart." Her eyes become slits as she pushes him off her bed rather roughly, and he hits the floor rather unceremoniously, his scythe clanging against the ground. "Get the hell out." Retreating once again, she turns her back to him, and he puts his hand on a knee, pushing himself up so that he's back to full height. A sly smirk appears on his face now, and Rin glances over her shoulder under the covers, knowing what's about to come.
She cringes; closing her eyes, but then opens them when nothing happens. She hears Hidan walk away, but not the sound of her door closing. Wary, she peeks out from her protection, when a heavy object collides with her. "TIME TO WAKE UP, RIN-SAN!" She is lifted from her bed, covers and all, and is carried to the common room. Unable to see who her assailant is because of her covers, she can only assume as to who it might be by the sing-song voice, and the childish tone it carried.
"Tobiii!" She is thrown onto the couch, and her arms flail around, pushing the covers from her face, when she feels a body plop down next to her, and she looks over cautiously. The Masked Member of the Akatsuki is leaning close to her, elbows propped on his knees, chin resting on his hands. "How is Rin-san?" Her eyes narrow and she feels someone lean over behind her. She sees violet eyes meet her own sapphire orbs, and she glances back at Tobi. "He put you up to this, didn't he?" Rin throws a thumb at Hidan, and the overly-excited man nods enthusiastically, twitching. "Yes! He did, he did!"
Rin slowly stands up, glaring at Hidan, who's smirk sends unwanted thrills down her back, as she gathers her blankets, watching Hidan cautiously. "Rin-kun isn't mad, is she?" Tobi puts a finger on his mask where his mouth would be, and the next look he receives sends him skittering back, falling off the couch in a heap. A chuckle emanates from the zealot, and Rin quickly turns her back to him, hustling off to her room.
Watching her walk away, a provocative smirk slips across his lips as he stands up, his foot hitting the ground. Tobi watches him as he stalks after Rin, and shakes his head. Just then, Pain walks in, and spies Tobi on the ground. Tobi glances back, and sees Pain. He blinks behind his mask, and slowly raises an arm, pointing as a cloak slips around the corner of the hall. Watching the shadow go, Pain sighs, and goes after the villain quietly.
Kai: PLEASE REVEIW! I would love it and appreciate it dearly!
Shadow Clone:(Yes, she would.)
Kai:Yep, HEY! *points at the random replica of me* HOW'D YOU GET OUT OF MY HEAD!
S.C.:(Oh, it was quite easy, actually.)
Kai: GET BACK IN MY HEAD! NOW!
