?This is my first fanfic, so be nice please!

Tris POV

"Tris Prior, please state what job you would like" Max calls my name and asked what job I want "Initiate trainer and a tattoo artist" " Ok, you are free to leave and get your apartment now" I leave and Tobias then walks out of the auditorium and follows
/me. "Hey Tris,I was wondering if you wanted to move in with me?" He walks towards me and our lips come crashing together. When I finally pull back I tell him "yes! I would love that" Zeke ran up to us and says" Candor or dauntless at 9 in my apartment,
/be there!" Tobias and I say yes in unison. We run back to Our apartment and Tobias makes dinner. " whatcha makin?" " I'm making my homemade Chicken Alfredo Parmesana!" "ooh, yummy" I say as Iwalk into the kitchen and wrap my arms
/around him. "the Chicken Alfredo Parmesana is ready!" Tobias serves us some. " ooh, tasty"I say as I taste it "I'm glad ya like it!" We finish and we walk to says" I have the floor" " no, you have the bed, with me" I pat the bed

and he comes up and wraps his arms around me" I love you Tris, very much" " I love you too Tobias, very, very much" after I fall asleep in his arms.

What did you think? Was it ok? Did I go to fast ? Ideas please

-ww25