For those who had started reading the beginning of a multi saga series- I felt like my writing was below sub par and wanted to re vise what all I have done and make them better so I had pulled all four chapters that I had out to be re written better.

I felt like my writing was rushed and bland so I'm taking my time now and really fleshing them out. While it may be shorter then most titanfall stories in terms of chapter-I believe in quality over quantity. So please-PLEASE leave me constructive criticism

I apologize for any inconveniences but I am working out a timeline for future stories :)

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UPDATE TIME!

I'VE RE'UPLOADED ALL FOUR CHAPTERS INCLUDING CHAPTER FIVE :D. I pray they are much much better and detailed then before :D So please dont forget to leave constructive criticism below

Update Time-11/7/2018
So i've somehow found myself disliking how the story is pacing. And feel like trying to continue off the legacy of a canon character isnt as smooth as i want it to be. So im pulling every thing out again (I'm really really sorry to those who may have liked what little i have out) but I just want something thats quality reading and not sub-par. So I hope all of you understand why the chapters suddenly dissapeared.

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