Naruto! The Movie!
Hello everyone, this is TheTwelf. This is my first story so please give me some feedback. I would like some constructive criticism because this is my first time writing to a public audience.
Also, please note- I don't plan to write that much, I feel more comfortable being a beta reader.
DISCLAIMER : I claim no right to Naruto or anything related to it. All rights are reserved for Kishimoto Masashi
"But Sasuke! You have to come home! Everyone misses you! I miss you!"
This was stated by our handsome, yet dense, hero. This hero had bright, spikey, blonde hair. He had six whisker-like birthmarks on his cheeks- 3 on each side. He was wearing a orange and black jumpsuit-mostly orange- that looked very old and worn.
"Naruto! You know I can't return to Konoha! After everything I've done, the people will not forgive me!"
The one yelling was our antagonist, Uchiha Sasuke. He was also handsome, with his odd duck-butted shaped- hair, to his beautiful pale skin. Sasuke wore a sort of robe that was open at the chest area. His back was facing the one called Naruto, so he could not see the tears streaming down his friend's face.
"Fine! If you keep insisting on doing this, I will do what I stated three years previously! I will break every bone in your body if I must to bring you back!" screamed the now indentified Uzumaki Naruto.
Naruto then summoned a clone who started to compress some sort of energy into a rapidly spinning ball in his hand.
"RASENGAN" All the world knew was a bright flash of light.
"AND CUT! That was amazing, guys!" stated Director Makino.
After the Fourth Ninja World War, Director Makino, the movie director with Koyuki when Naruto went to Yukigakure, asked Naruto and Sasuke if they wanted to make a movie together. Instantly, Naruto accepted, while Sasuke was a bit hesitant, due to the general public disliking Sasuke because he allied with Madara, now identified as Obito Uchiha.
When Naruto found out about his hesitance, he reassured him that the people will not hate him because he helped Naruto fight off the true Madara, who was reanimated by Kabuto Yakushi.
The movie was suggested to be about Naruto's life between the age of twelve until the end of the Fourth Ninja World War. No one opposed this idea because Naruto was the one who saved the ninja world by severing Madara's control with the Juubi and seperating it back into the seven bijuu by destroying its unfinished body.
All though it is about Naruto's life, there have been a few modifications to make it more, as the director says, dramatic.
"This movie is going to be a hit! I can see it now."
AN : So tell me about it, did you like it? Hate it? give me some feedback. I don't need many reviews, just some advice I can use to make myself a better author.
