AN: So quickly, I've decided to rewrite this entire
Story, (even if it was one chapter.) seeing as it felt boring and I left a shit ton of information out of it. Hopefully it'll be better than before. I also decided to let Yang keep her hair, it just didn't feel right without it. but anyways This time for real, I got BIG stuff planned. (If I actually make it that far.) Also 1st person Pov, I'll change it next chapter, unless you guys want to keep it.
Chapter 1
"This is it..." I thought, blood covering my face. Those were just soldiers, expendable, yet the real threat has just arrived.
"I, The Subterranean King will take you on!.."
I ran towards the large monster, ready for the very battle I've longed for. I jumped at the King, getting ready to swing my fist as it swung its glowing purple swor-Beep-Beep-Beep-Beep-Be-
I swung my fist down onto the alarm clock, making it stop.. but also destroying the floorboards accidentally. "It was just a dream..DAMN IT!" I thought. turning to face the destroyed floorboard I sighed with a blank expression. "Whoops.. I guess I'll get someone to fix that.."
I sat up on the floor that I slept on, hearing a commotion outside.. something about a.. King taking over the surface?! I quickly stepped out onto the porch to take a look, checking to see if my suspicions were true. Yep. It was the same monsters in my dream yet, they seemed way smaller than they were in my dream. It doesn't seem like they would do any harm to the surface.. but I couldn't underestimate them.
I quickly ran back inside, putting on black boots, a yellow jumpsuit which was.. difficult to get into, Black fingerless gloves and a beautiful yellow cape that I got as a gift. Actually the whole outfit was a gift. Moving those thoughts aside, Just as quickly as I put on my clothes, I ran back to the porch, seeing the monsters still there, I jumped down on top of the King, slamming it into the ground and getting ready for a great battle.
"Alright! Now bring it on!" I shouted cracking my knuckles. The soldiers stared at me with shock and fear in their eyes, before I even noticed. I was too focused on the impending battle that was— a white flag stood out which read, "Sorry about that!" And every monster that was there dissapeared back into the Earth. I sighed, "I guess I got my hopes up for nothing.. I wonder if there's sale today.."
POV Change
"Swarm Of mosquitos in Z-City? Yet I detect none so far. Maybe it was a rou-" my thoughts were interrupted by a laugh, that sounded much like a woman, except it held a sadistic tinge in it. The laugh seemed to have come from the left so I quickly made my way towards it.
As it grew louder, I noticed a massive swarm of mosquitos, circling what appears to be its master, a woman with very pale skin, but has black stripes all over her body, she also had the wings, arms, and legs of a mosquito. She also had no clothing, only the white armor covering her. "Come on guys! That wasn't nearly enough as next time. Come back and get more, This is barely enough to satisfy me!" She said as the mosquitos flew off looking for another victim.
Seeing as the mosquitos were no longer in the way of the target, I raised my arm as it had a orange hue to it. Suddenly a orange blast made its way towards the woman-like mosquito. Before it hit the intended target, the woman heard the blast coming and swiped her claw, deflecting the shot. She stared at me with a glare before I spoke.
"So you control these mosquitoes using a sort of signal and use the blood they take for yourself? That would explain why they've been acting so weirdly." I started before continuing. "So if I get rid of you, would the mosquitoes fly off?" I questioned but the answer was obvious.
The woman smirked. "And why would I answer to a nobody like you? Little ones, looks like a free meal's on the menu. Go drain him of his blood." Without hesitation, the mosquitos swarmed me, but I felt nothing except a whole bunch of bugs crawling around my metal body. "Incinerate." Was the one word I spoke before a huge flame engulfed the entire swarm. The mosquitoes disappeared, and all I saw was the woman in a shocked expression. I raised my metal arm again, preparing to end the monster's life. "Stay where you are, I'm going to end you."
Much to my surprise, the woman began smirking, like this was a joke. "You, end me?! Ha! Well come at me then!" She shouted as I shot a blast at her, she dodged it as I shot another, seeing as she was distracted by the next shot coming towards her, I jumped onto a side of a building and launched myself towards her, before I can land a solid blow, she flew to the side, dodging both the blast and me. She deciding to counter my attack with her own, raising her claw onto me, but I quickly blocked the blow with my arms.
Although it did push me back onto the ground, I readjusted myself and landed smoothly onto the ground. Raising my arm, I shot a flurry of orange flames, like a machine gun, although she quickly dodged all of them and flew towards me, taking my arm with her horn that protruded out of her forehead in the process. But I managed to grab a pair of mosquito-like legs as well, throwing them behind me. "Where are my legs?!" She asked sounding surprisingly innocent before noticing them on the ground behind me.
I ran towards her fleeing figure and jumped with a large blast, blasting me towards her, she blocked the blow and we began exchanging punches, but I was at a disadvantage, seeing as I only had one arm. I ended the exchange by uppercutting her into the sky, and blood began spewing out of her wounds. I landed back onto the ground as the woman began fleeing again, this time I shot a charged blast, but she signaled the remaining mosquitos to take the shot for her. Before I had time for another shot, the mosquitos flew away, and towards her circling around her. "This isn't good, if she's taking that much blood from the entire town, it might not just be a food source.. but instead something else.. I need to end this." I began charging up a huge blast and aimed the shot at the swarm of mosquitos getting ready to destroy— "Hey! Get back here you damn mosquito, I'm not finished with you damn it!" I was interrupted by a blonde woman chasing one mosquito with bug spray..? "Hey, you should evacuate! It isn't safe here!" I shouted towards her, she took notice at the swarm of mosquitos and pointed towards it. "Uh, what's that?!"
"It's a dangerous swarm of mosquitos, you should evac—"
"Mosquitos?! Why are there so many?! It's not even that warm out!"
"There's a monster that's been—"
"Seriously, this day is the worst so far.. actually I've had worst.." seeing as the woman won't leave, I turned back towards the swarm as a loud laughter erupted from the circling mosquitos. Suddenly, the mosquitos all flew down, swarming the entire block. "Incinerate." Lightning sparks flew out of my palms as a huge blast erupted from my body, engulfing the entire area in a few seconds. The mosquitos were gone. "That was a bad idea bringing the mosquitos towards the ground where I can easily dispatch them. Since I found you, I confirmed there were no humans in a 500 meter radius, so I was able to use the blast without any casualties.. Wait.. that girl!" I remember the girl I was talking to just a few seconds ago, I turned back to where she was standing, and I quickly covered my eyes with my one arm. "O-oh Sorry about that!" She was naked, but I can't help but notice she was ripped.
"Stop staring!" She shouted, although not wanting to cause anymore.. problems, I took of my pumpkin Pete hoodie with the sleeve ripped from the attack from earlier and gave it to her. "Here put this on, at least it'll.. cover up most." "Thanks." Was her response. She put it on quickly as I tried to ask her how she survived the blast. "How did you—" before I could speak, I heard a familiar sadistic laugh. I turned to the sound and looked on, surprised. The mosquito-like woman had changed physically, going from white to red, Probably from all the blood, and also grew a new pair of legs.
"Hahaha! You Idiot! I no longer need the little ones. Take a look!" She shouted before slicing a building with her claw. The whole building erupted and was cut into 3 separate pieces. I stared in shock. That was much more power than before. If she was giving me a hard time in her state before, than I have a small chance of winning this battle now. "Hehahaha! Look at my power! Look at how strong I've become!" She had a sadistic grin and before I could process what happened, she was behind me, slicing, the left side of my metal abdomen. I turned as soon as i can and went for a punch, before I found myself in the air from another attack, she flew towards me all while laughing the entire time, as I fell back down, slicing more parts of me as I had no way of countering. There's only one option left. And if I don't do this sooner, she'll kill me and many more. A blue light formed in my abdomen, 'All I can do is Self-destr-" before I could, The laughter instantly disappeared and blood splattered against the corner of a building. I turned in shock as I landed on the ground. The blonde woman from earlier, with her hand raised.
"Mosquitos.. Suck!.. badum tssh.. that was a good joke right?" She looked at me, arms crossed and a blank expression, only showing a small smirk at her joke.
"Ma'am What is your name?!" How the hell did she do that?! A slap to the face instantly killed the monster and my attacks did no damage to it.
"I'm not old! Oh. It's Yang, Yang Xiao Long. Yours?"
"Jaune Arc. I'd like to be your disciple!" I shouted. I needed this power! To avenge my family!
"Well. Okay. I'll see you later, but first, was that joke good? Please tell me it is."
"I-I guess so.."
END
AN: Hello! Hope you enjoyed this rewrite. So I went for a 1st person Pov, but I'll change it back to 3rd person next chapter, unless you guys want me to keep it this way. Also, there will be another story up, that's basically the OVA of this story. It'll come soon. Anyways thanks for reading!
Rewrite: 2/8/18
Word Count: 1,900
