Authors note!!!

Im so sorry I havent updated in forever!! I hope to get writing soon but Im at a difficult part of my life now and I had to get a summer job, bleh.

Anyways I just had to come and rant about ZEBRAS. Wow. I was lyke I new it! When stuccy showed up positive for DNA.

And it also ticked me off that Olivia kissed that pre- pubescent psycho. Especially with Elliot RIGHT THERE!

God dang it.

Okay here is my rendition on how it shoulda gone. So spoilers ahead if u havent seen it yet!!!!


(okay this is right when Olivia tells stuccy that he shouldn't kill elliot yet)

"No not yet, I want the bastard to see this." Olivia said crossing the space between them. She frowned a little at the thought of what she was doing, but elliot's life was at danger and she needed to help him anyway possible.

She kissed stuccy having to hold back the bile in her throat. He wrapped his little third grader arms around her waist pulling her closer.

Olivia put her fingers to his face and looked over at Elliot momentarily, pleading for him to forgive her.

He nodded and glared at Stuccy waiting to kill him for even touching his Livvie. woah where'd that come from?

He smiled and kicked Stuccy between the legs. Olivia quickly disarmed him and knocked him out, grabbing a knife and cutting Elliot loose.

"Is your face okay?" She asked referring to where she kept hitting him earlier. She raised a hand to his face and gently caressed his cheek where a redish purple bruise was forming.

He took her hand in his. "That was the grossest thing ive ever seen you do."

"Yeah I know." she said shuddering.

"You were right tho," he said continuing when he saw her confusion. " seeing you kiss him was a lot worse than death."

By this time he had closed the space between them and cupped her face in his hands. He bent to kiss her, and Olivia closed her eyes.

She stood there with her eyes closed, but it never came. Olivia opened her eyes to see Elliot there staring at her lips and then at Stuccy.

Olivia raised a brow.

Elliot smiled and pulled his sleeve over his fingers before wiping the Stuccy psyhopath germs off Olivia's lips.

She laughed, "Better now?"

"Hell yes." then Elliot took her in his arms and dipped her kissing her softly but passionately.

They were both flushed and breathless when they separated from the kiss moments later.

"Wow." they heard a voice say and turned to the side where O'Halleran stood. "I Knew it! Melinda owes me some serious cash."

"I thought you were dead." Olivia said.

"Nope" he said striking a superman pose, "Nothing can kill…THE MIGHTY LAB TECH!" then O'Halleran skipped into the hallway and headed for the morgue.

"That was odd." Elliot commented before lacing his fingers through Olivia's and leading her out of the lab.

"Sushi, ya right. " Liv laughed.

(Fade Out)


I actually like O'Halleren! I didn't want him to die, and he does strike me as the superman type of guy. Anyways please review and tell me what u think.