Naruto shippuden: kamakazi's adventure
Authors notes: hey guys, Im back and better than ever, with a naruto fanfic, with my oc, kamakazi zononku. It will be about 30 chapters, and will end with the pain saga, and my own saga entitled the "guardian angel" saga. Im changing bits, to my taste and adding the spaces in gaps likes, instead of them skipping to the day where they do something important, I will bits in the middle for you to get a better feel of my character.
Chapter 1: sasukes rage! A kamakazi in the leaf village!
Naruto gave a wikced grin as he stood staring at the slide open door, which had a whiteboard marker jammed within it. His eyes darted to his two friends, sakura and sasuke, and he wanted to see what they were up to. Sakura had sharp eyes like daggers, scanning Naruto like a computer, all the time to make sure he hadn't done anything stupid, (which was 95% of the time). Sasuke leant back against his chair, engrossed in thought, dark thoughts that know could ever understand. Sakura's eyes met with Naruto, and she saw the grin that painted his face. " this cant be good" thought sakura. Sasuke instantly came out of his thinking state and began to glare at Naruto. " thats what he gets for being late" chuckled Naruto. " Our new sensei will never fall for that simple trick" he stated with a look on his face like fire. Sasuke liked when he had said something smart, as it proved that he was ahead of the others. Sakura waited until she knew saske had finished his sentence and added " yeh Naruto, your so immature, why cant you be like sasuke". " yeh tell that weirdo, whos boss" said sakura's inner voice repetedly punching air. As soon as the words hit the canal of naruto's ears he began to fill with rage. How could sakura say that? Naruto was destined to be the next and powerfulest hokage, so how could he say that. Just before he reacted, the slide in door, began to jiggle, and Naruto smiled. The time was now. Sakura and sasuke watched closely, as there new sensei popped his head through the door, and the friction made a whiteboard marker drop on his face. He had grey spiky hair sticking up, and half his face was covered, and the only thing visible on his face was, his left eye. Even though his mouth and face were covered, he had a look on his face like he was tired, or bored. He opened the door and walked in. "NARUTO!" burst out sakura as the teacher walked up to them. Naruto was on the floor, he had no control of his body, the laughter took over him, pouring in large giggles. Sakura slammed her fist into naruto's face which send him flying into a wall.
Sasuke's mind began to wonder. " he fell for that trick, is this our sensei" thought sasuke and carefully watched.
Sakura began to apoligize. " Im so sorry sensei" squealed sakura.
Kakashi, cleared his throat and suddenly said in a loud but soft voice " my first impression of this team". He then paused and calmly said " your a bunch of idiots" when he said this everyone ( including Naruto) gasped and said nothing. Even sasuke was speechless.
Later that day, the gang travelled to the roof, where they were greeted by there sensei. " now then, lets greet each other one at a time" groaned kakashi, who sighed every two seconds as if his life couldn't get worse. The roof was windy. You could smell the food being served downstairs, which made Naruto go crazy. You could hear the bushes of the trees banging together, and the gang would sit on the cold ground, which felt like sharp daggers on the floor.
Naruto ushered in kakashi's direction. " i think you should start" grinned Naruto. Kakashi stood up right. " ok we will each do names, likes and dislikes, hobbies and dreams" rushed kakashi sighing slightly less. " my name is kakashi hatake, I don't feel like telling you my likes and dislikes, my hopes and dreams, well don't know, and my hobbies? Lots!" said kakashi who was staring at an ant on the floor more than the group. The members of team 7 all gave an emotionless look. " thanks, all he told was his name" whispered sakura. Naruto nodded and sasuke, was staring at a tree, without blinking. He could have sworn it had gotten closer, right?
Kakashi pointed at sakura. "you". Sakura stood up. Sakura spoke with a clear voice. " my name is sakura haruno, and what I like is.." she then blushed and stared at sasuke, and closed her eyes and stared giggling. " my hobbies are..." then a giggle disguised what she was saying. " my hopes and dreams for the future are..." she began to hum wedding music and closed her eyes and began towards sasuke, not realizing she wasn't just imagining. Sasuke took a shiruken out of his pouche and aimed it at the tree. He knew something was wrong with it. Just he prepared to throw it, sakura tripped up and landed on sasuke. Sasuke tryed to push her off but she was in a trance. " sakura get off" said sasuke who was having trouble pushing her off. Naruto stared in schock. Sakura ran back to her place and said " my only dislike is" her face turned red and she screamed at the top of her lungs " NARUTTTTTTOOOOO!" Naruto slammed his face into his lap. Just his luck, sakura says she hates him, just when they were starting to be friends. Sakura had her face glued to sauke and began to childishly giggle evry minute. Nartuo stepped up. " my name is Naruto izumaki, And i like ramen, i don't like waiting for it though, and my hobbies is trying and comparing each different ramen, and my dream for the future is to be the next hokage, Believe it!" exploded Naruto as he said his catch phrase. Sasuke waited for no introduction. As he began to talk, sakura could imagine it now. Sasuke saying " I love sakura, i cant live with out her, i hate not being around her, my hobbies are loving sakura, and my dream is to marrie sakura". She couldn't wait. " my name is sasuke uchicha". As soon as he said this kakashi gave a shudder. " I hate a lot of things, and don't like anything specific". Sakura's heart broke inside after hearing that. " my dream is a dream, of the inevitable future, of my clan being restored, to defeat a certain someone" as he said someone his voice was like poison, injected into sakura's and naruto's mind. Naruto and sakura's mouths were wide open while, kakashi was digging dirt out of a nail. Then out of nowhere, sasuke felt something strange like when you know when your being watched. He instantly jumped and a shuriken landed on the floor, a couple feet away, sasuke soared down and noticed that the tree had gone missing. Sasuke looked all ways for the one responsible. Kakashi was smiling, even though knew it. " hmm.. hes making a good entrance" he thought.
Sasuke watched as a shuriken landed straight past him, and hit naruto's hair and he flew and hit a stone pillar. Naruto was knocked out cold. Sasuke had a minor scratch as it slightly hit, but sakura ran to comfort him, but he glared at her. "go help Naruto" he screeched which made her run towards Naruto then, a figure jumped straight in front of him. he walked to the light and saw a child around his age. He had messy brown which spiked up, and had cream skin like sakura. He had a costume looking like he had a wetsuit on, but it was a zip on coat, which had blue lines going throught the arms and legs. He had yellows eyes with a hint of black in them. His coat was just like a wetsuit but he had gloves to go with it which were the same colour. He was wearing the same sandals as sauke, and was as tall as Naruto. He had a expression, which looked determined. He had a belt of shirukens, and had a headband which said zononku zamara on it. Sasuke jumped 3 metres in the air and as he landed he pushed his feet forward, and dashed towards this unknown boy. " take this" he punched this boy in the jaw which send him flying back but he recovered from the blow, and pushed his feet against one of the pillars and flew towards sasuke and grabbed to him as they fell of the roof and were fighting midair.
"take this" said saske as he punched the boy in the stomach, causing him to split blood. The boy pushed his feet against sasuke, and rode down the building on sasuke's back like a skateboard. After a couple of seconds saske began to burn and he quickly reached for a shiruken and cut this boys suit, and pushing him away.
Meanwhile ichimaru, choji, and oni were walking as ino and ichimaru were having an arguement. " hey ino just shut up about sasuke, he aint that special!" said ichimaru fuming. " you will never understand love ichimaru, sasuke is my angel and one day he will fall down, and save my life" she said as hearts grew in her eyes. Before ichimaru was going to react ino, looked up to see a brown hair boy falling down from the sky and about to land on her, so she began to scream. But before he could sasuke pushed him into a straw pile breaking his fall. Sasuke was a few metres from landing in the ground . " choji" shouted sasuke, nearly panicing. " im on it" said choji dropping his bag of chips, and began to grow, and sasuke landed on his belly. Sasuke then dropped of him, and was on the floor with no breath, and he then got up, to see the boy holding his hands' in the same hand sign as Naruto but with differences with the thumbs, and he screamed " LIGHT STYLE, HEAVENLY CROSS" as a cross shaped blast of chakra came at him. he put his hands in a cross and prepared to block.
Up at the roof, questions were being fired. " hey we need to help sasuke" sobbed sakura, as teared grouped in her eyes. Naruto was smiling. " with sasuke gone I will finally get sakura"
Kakashi hushed sakura. " sasuke is alright ok, he just with kamakazi" sneered kakashi. " kamakazi?" they both said in unision. Kakashi gave a slightly evil laugh, "youre 4th member" kakashi chuckled. Naruto shaked, "why do we need a 4th member" shuddered Naruto. Then kakashi's voice formed a cold whisper " you idiots are part of the handicapped teamed" he chuckled as Naruto clenched his fist in rage and sakura just stood still as ice.
How was that guys, well my arm hurts from righting 1800 words. And I ended with a cliff hanger too. Anyway i need some oc's so send me ideas but anyway next time we will find out if kamakazi is a good or bad person. So anway plz review ok with what I did well and what I could work on so. Anyway see ya.
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