Shalom!
So I'm experimenting with a new story, I've recently gotten back into writing so I will be continuing with Every Cloud my deepest apologies for not writing in months my head has been a mess but it's getting sorted now.
So this story will be a Hotch and Emily story. I've messed with the timeline and added a few of m own characters.
This will probably be a fairly short story no more than 5 chapters I predict.
I want to try my share at a sort of case fic but it will mostly be centered on the characters rather than the case itself.
Here is a bit of back story in advance:
Hayley never died- she left when Jack was 1yr signing away her parental rights and moving cross country
Emily has a daughter but that will be explained later on within the story
Aaron and Emily have been dating for about a year but the team don't know yet
Foyet never happened neither did Doyle
This is a glimpse at part of the first chapter to see what you all think; I have written more but I want to see opinions before I post it all.
It gets better as it goes on; I wasn't quite sure how to start.
Apologies for the very long authors note.
-AJ
SSA Emily Prentiss sat working dutifully at her desk in the bullpen trying her best to get her reports finished so she could get home and relax; there had been no case for three days running and she was rather enjoying getting home in time to actually cook a meal and unwind from work like people with 'normal' jobs do.
Glancing at the clock on the computer screen she sighed it was only 9:42am; it was going to be one of those days slow and treacherous. So far she'd been ten minutes late for work after getting stuck in a traffic jam on her way in from the coffee shop, her coffee had spilt all over her as she ran to catch the lift which explained why she was currently wearing a navy t-shirt with FBI written in bold yellow across the back.
Sighing she turned back to carry on her with her reports, a few minutes had passed when Technical Analyst Penelope Garcia ran through the glass doors looking frantic as she made a beeline to the conference room shouting about getting everyone in their asap.
Walking up the steps towards conference room she glanced into Hotch's office seeing him there she stuck her head through the door coughing to alert him of her presence "Garcia called an emergency briefing now in the conference room." Seeing him nod she left the room.
Once everyone was situated around the table JJ started "There has been a case called in, a hostage situation at Barrett Elementary, we've been called to talk down the unsubs."
Reid looked toward JJ "Did you say unsubs as in plural?"
Nodding JJ answered "The school has been evacuated apart from two classes, a kindergarten and a 1st grade class, according to the local PD at the scene there are two unsubs in each room, the teachers were sent out when the rooms were first taken over, as of yet no demands have been issued. There are 32 children in total and 1 adult."
Derek asked "who is the one adult."
"23 year old Holly Pierson an ASL interpreter for one of the kindergarten students."
Garcia glanced round at the team noticing Emily who had tears in her eyes, Rossi who looked solemn and Hotch who looked like he'd seen a ghost, she gasped as realization hit her "That's … That's Jack's elementary school."
... To be continued - Thank you for reading
