A/N

Here's my fanfic for the Brave fabdom, as I saw it today with my cousin and loved it, and had this idea in my head all week, but wanted to see the movie first before writing it.

Lord Shamus's daughter, Princess Elisa is partially sighted but lacks confidence and self esteem in herself, but her father sends her there, to live with her cousin Merida and her family, but during that time, Elisa is in awe of Merida and the fierce princess of Clan Dunbroch helps her come out of her shell.

The title was inspired by the story, Merida Comes as I read it this morning but it's great.

I hope you enjoy.


A cool summer breeze blew through the messy tangled red hair of a young teenage archer, as she was riding through the forests of Scotland, as she was riding on her horse, Angus, as she was having another personal princess free day

Since the bear incident, Merida and her mother, Queen Elinor were very close, as she was teaching her mother to shoot from a bow, as she had an new bow but she liked that her mother was being curious about what Merida was into.

She smiled, as her arrow hit a raven, but she was enjoying herself, as she was being herself and free.

But as she rode further into the forest, she saw will o wisps, making the tomboyish princess anxious, knowing what had happened last time she'd let the wisps lead her to her fate.

She realised that it was dinnertime back at Castle Dunbroch, as shr remembered there was something important happening tonight at the castle, but she was riding fast towards the castle, as the wind blew through her wild red hair.

She then approached the stables, of Castle Dunbroch, as she got off Angus, but was running inside, but Elinor was waiting.

"Am I late, Mom?" she asked her.

"No, you're not.

Lord Shamus and his daughter, Elisa aren't here yet." Elinor said.

Merida was relieved, as she went to her room, but was changing into a light green dress which she could move in.

She heard Maudie yelling, as her brothers were causing mischief, but Elinor was trying to calm their wildness.

She smiled, as she knew that Elisa was different from other princesses in the Highlands, but she wondered why they were visiting the castle.

Maybe it's another tradition, like the marriage thing, with the princes.

Mom will probably explain, when Lord Shamus gets here, with Elisa.


A ship was approaching the part of the Highlands near where Castle Dunbroch was, but a young girl with brown red hair was squinting at the oncoming island, as she was reading a fairytale book, about brave warriors, as the wind blew through her hair.

Her name was Elisa, but she lived with her parents in a castle far from Dunbroch but no suitors had wanted her, as she was too different for their liking, but it made Elisa sad, as her left hand gripped the top of her long cane, as she was partially sighted, meaning she needed her cane to help her see but could still see, just not in the dark and she couldn't see sides, and she could still see and read, just like anybody else, as her imagination was very wild.

She heard laughter, as her younger sister, Moira was playing with her father, Lord Shamus.

Elisa loved her little sister, as she was eight, and Elisa was fourteen, but they wondered where their mother was, but had no idea of the secret their father had kept from them, but the brown red haired eight year old approached her older sister, but smiled, as she wore a purple dress.

"Hey, Elisa.

Excited about seeing Uncle Fergus, huh?

I bet cousin Merida has some wild adventures, to tell us.

She's awesome, and the most toughest princess, in the Highlands." Moira said.

Elisa smiled, as she liked Merida, her cousin, as they had played together, when they were little but loved her cousin's wild stories and her fierceness.

"Yeah, I bet she will." she replied.

They then heard their father yell, that they had reached land.

Both girls were excited, as they got off the ship.

Elisa took a deep breath, as they were heading for Castle Dunbroch...