All Explained
If you do not want to have to read all this stuff below, just read the story entries in the order I post them, OK? You can skip this chapter entry if you really want to, but there is a mini-story at the end of all these notes.
Okay Hetalia fans... welcome to the crazy plot map of !Femtalia ! ((Quick note, the title of this story is actually supposed to have a ! in front of the word Femtalia, but for some reason Fanfic won't let me do that, so just remember, the title is !Femtalia))
But before you can all read the story, just read all of this, and please note that I'm in high school so I might not post as often as you might want me to, so I apologize in advance for unnecessary suspense. Sorry :(
((I would be very thankful for any comments or ideas for mini-stories you would like me to do, so please do leave comments.))
If you like this story, you can check out my first story, D. Gray Sister (based off of D. Gray Man) ((If you do I hope you like it :) ))
Soo... This isn't a real chapter, sorry. I just thought some parts of the way I have this plot set up were a bit confusing so I decided to make this first entry an explanation.
This particular story has 4 different plot-lines, and i'm lazy so I didn't want to write them in different places ((Also because they all tie into each other, so even if I did, you wouldn't understand what was going on.)) I just decided this was easier for both of us.
The four plots are:
1: Femtalia: The title plot-line, this is the second plot that is introduced in the story, but it's an underlying idea in all the plots afterwords. (As in it's known of, but the exact events happening there are not automatically known by all the characters.) ((The same is true for the other two main plots of the story as well))
2: U.S.A. (or United State of America) ((BTW, I don't make typos ;) )): This is the first major plot introduced in the story. I really like the plans I have for it, but it's a very loosely planned story for all the parts that don't have anything to do with the other plots. (( That's so I can mess with it and make the characters appear in mini-stories, which I like.))
((This story is ALOT of fun to write, and I hope it's fun for you to read too :)
3: Pangea: This is the last MAIN plot introduced, and by far the most confusing ((This is where everything comes together... ;) )) ... ((Sorry but I can't give any hints as to what happens in any of the main plots, but I will tell you something cool... The first chapter of this plot-line is actually a mini-story ;) ))
And finally...
The fourth plot-line is the mini-stories, and it just follows more of the minor characters through some of their Misadventures, and has almost no affect on the major plots. ((Usually ;) )) This is the only plot where ANY character is allowed to break the fourth wall. ((Because it's just not fair if the mini-stories have nothing special about them at all.)) Some mini-stories are so long that I have to post them as separate entries.
Although in any other plot, I only have three people who are allowed to break it. They are:
1) Italy Veneziano
2) Prussia
3) !Austria/Hungary (Yes I know they are two different people, but I need them both to help keep Prussia in line))
LAST THING! I PROMISE! ((Whenever a character's name has a ! in front of it, it means that the character is an alternate-dimension version, and I just haven't Released their name yet.)) ((Also things written in double parentheses are me breaking the fourth wall.))
Last Author's Note:
Now, I know you are sick and tired of reading about plot, it's just the more I write, the more explanations I think I need to add. This note's about the way I keep things organized …Chapter Labels. In the navigation menus (located at the top-right and bottom-right of the story-viewing page) you can see the "titles" of each entry. Most of them will be chapter entries, like this one, but remember that I will be writing Mini-Stories as well, and the way i'm keeping the plot organized (so I won't accidentally give away any info about the other plots) seems to be confusing without an explanation.
There are really only three (3) things you need to understand:
Plot prefixes: these will be at the beginning of the label. They show which plot is mainly affected by what happens in the entry
Fem- the Femtalia plot is mainly affected
USA- the United State of America plot is mainly affected
Pan- the Pangea plot is mainly affected
MS- this is just a mini-story, this will not have a chapter stamp, but rather an adventure title. ((I'll put a number so you know what chapter it takes place in, but most mini-stories that i'm planning are taking place before or after most of the plot) Any mini-stories that take more than one entry will have the title and then a number to show it is part of a mini-series.
...(Please remember stuff that happens in mini-stories can be important too!)
Chapter stamps: this is just the three letters, C-H-P with a period after them and the number of the chapter in roman numerals at the end. The underlined part: (Fem-Chp.I-Pro)
(( A chapter ends with an action or discovery, and any mini-stories posted before the chapter end take place in the time that the last entry left off at, unless the Timestamp says different))
Timestamps: all the stories are set in the same time frame, which means that time, technically, is moving in the other plots while you are reading this. (People don't just stand still when you're not in the room you know!)
there are four timestamps:
Pro- a Prologue story (takes place before the exposition of the plot)
Ep- an Epilogue story (takes place after the resolution of plot)
FB- a FlashBack story (a flashback to earlier in or before the plot)
Prem- a Premonition story (takes place at any time)
And, well... that's it. everything's been explained. I hope you like this story! :)
((So even though this wasn't meant to be a real chapter, I want to put some story in this entry anyway. this is a prologue; the first meeting of Fiji and the Philippines!))
((P.O.V: Fiji))
Oh no! I'm so late! I hope that all the others won't be too mad at me... ((Don't worry, they will))
I run down the street at my top speed, at least 10 mph, ((Really, only 10?)) I'm barely able to see because of the pouring rain. I never knew that the U.K. could be so dreary. It's been raining since I got here two days ago... What was THAT? ((Was it a squirrel?))
A bright flash of color ahead of me caught my eye, and I just barely can pull to a stop before crashing into it. Into, HIM.
"Excuse me please! I am very late!" I yell at the red and blue clad person in front of me. Leaning forward, I can tell it's a man now. I'm just close enough to tell through the downpour. But when he tried to speak to me I could not make out what he was saying. "Could you repeat that please?" I yell over the storm. I can tell he said something again, but a not-so-distant crash of thunder interrupted him. I leaned even closer to listen and finally caught what he had said. It was "oh ngayon kung ano ang I gawin?" ((That's "Oh now what will I do?" in Filipino)) Wait, Filipino? Ohhh…
"Are you here for the world summit meeting as well?" I repeat the phrase in Filipino just in case he doesn't know English and he answers (in English) with "Yes, I am Philippines. I'm guessing you are a country as well?"
"Yes, my name is Fiji. Nice to meet you." ((Yes, and I am the Fourth-wall police)) I bow a little at the hips, as is my custom, and as I come back up, I finally get a good look at his face. WOW he is so CUTE! He has deep brown eyes with streaks of golden yellow stretching from the pupil to the end of the iris, although it was so faint that you wouldn't be able to see it if you weren't only a foot from his face. Oh… I just realized how close I am to him, and I take a step back. Blushing, and hoping my light cocoa-colored skin would hide it. His skin is just a little darker than mine, but it suits him perfectly, blending with his eyes and his easy smile… Wait, he's smiling? I feel my blush deepen, and stutter an apology.
"S-sorry for staring at you like that…" His smile just deepened and he just said, "It's OK, I have a feeling that we were thinking of the same thing." He leaned closer to me, and I try to lean away, but there is a wall behind me, so I'm trapped now. Since when were we standing in a doorway? ((Since, like EVER)) Umm, can you stop that?
"Sorry for my rudeness, but you're very cute." He whispered. His voice, it's almost as if he's reciting a poem. it's got a certain lilt to it... ((You're falling... falling in LOVE))
Another crash of thunder interrupted whatever lame answer/mumble I was going to say next, but it wouldn't have mattered anyway because then he grabbed my hand and we started walking through the winding streets.((Two seconds pass, and you can't even remember what you were going to say? You've got it bad girl...)) Oh, and YOU'RE any better? ((I don't have any crushes, girl)) Anyway... he said something about knowing that the World summit place in London was closer to the east, so I guess he was leading us east.
"Oh, there you two blokes are!" We turn around the next corner to see Britain in the street walking toward us. ((I swear every time I see those eyebrows I feel like he's wearing make-up just to make them look like that.)) Shhhh... Don't be mean. "I had a feeling you had gotten lost." He continued. "Was the rain too confusing?" ((NO, it was your dumb-ass confusing city!)) We both nod yes and he sighs. "Well, follow me, we've all been waiting for you to get there before we started." He turns and starts walking and we fall into step behind him as he leads us through the winding streets. I'm amazed that anyone can find their way through this city, but then, this is his country…
The meeting went on just like all the others, people argued, nothing got done, and I still don't have any new friends. It's not easy being a small island in the middle of the ocean, all on your own. ((I know Fiji, I know...))
I'm just leaving when someone calls my name. I stop and turn around, only to see Philippines running up to me. He stops by me and pants "I… never… answered… you… correctly... " I stand and look at him awhile while he catches his breath. Once he has, he straightens up and says,
"It's nice to meet you too, Fiji. Will you be my friend?"
((Hope you liked the story!))
((Fiji was actually the first OC character I made that has absolutely NO impact on the story at all, and the next was California.))
Thanks for reading! This is VesLuvsAnime, signing off... See Ya Later!
