AN: Hey there. Shyshock here. This is officially my first story and I hope it is a good one. Please leave a review and tell me what you think of it. Also on a side note, the song "looking through the glass" by sour stone will influence this story. I will also be looking for more songs to go with the mood im trying to create. If you have any suggestions please pm me. On to the story.
First-person POV
I have changed haven't I. I was once just a happy naïve child but not anymore. My life was ruined by an evil organization bent on world domination. This is all his fault. That blasted Diablo is at fault for all of this and you know it. Maybe, maybe not. You and I both know that it could go either way. Bah, he is obviously to blame for all of this, and if you will not do anything about it I will. No not yet. We will be arriving at the school in a few more minutes, and when we get there we will confront the only one who could help us, El Diablo(whip crack). Yes Shyshock, yes, however we can not show reveal ourselves immediately. With the C-notes we have made since this ordeal began I will be able to recreate the second coming of Diablo, and what do you know, were here. Yes, and now it is time to start the plan, but first lets meet up with this Prickly character.
Third-person POV
The sun slowly rose above the eastern horizon as a new entity walks up to the double doors of Third street school. He has brought forth calamity and despair to those that he cared about and is left to a life of an avenger. He is known and feared as… well that is better left to someone with more experience, isn't it. Any way, this day should have been like any other, however this day will forever be known as the beginning of the greatest adventure known to both kid and man alike. The adventure of EL SANTO DE LA LLAMA. the kids in Ms. Grotke's class sit quietly in anticipation for recess. Like any other day six students are preparing for the greatest fun a nine to ten year old can have. "Guys, does today feel weird to you." asked a slightly nervous T.J. Detweiler. "You know, normally I would say that feelings do not allow a person to tell how a day will go, but even I have to admit that this day does coincide with many known examples of legends and their beginnings." stated the brains of the gang, Gretchen Grundler. "What do you mean Gretchen?" asks one half of the right hand and one of those closest to the leader, a Ms. Ashley Spinelli. "Well Spinelli, today is the day that was once said to be the day that some of the most dangerous and controversial historical figures. One example is that today is said to be the day that the original El Diablo(whip crack) came into the light." "The first Diablo huh. Could be an important date to you, right `Gus`?" stated the most athletic of the six, one Vince Lassalle. "What do you mean Vince?" asked the kind and gentle soul of this group, Mikey Blumberg. "You know what I mean Mikey. Seeing as we personally know the current El Diablo(whip crack) we have a duty to help get him over that funk he's been in since he reviled himself as El Diablo(whip crack)." " Yea, I know, I know, and it just breaks my heart to see one of the greatest friend we will ever know has driven himself into a stupor driven by the guilt and sorrow of a passed life." stated Mikey with his usual Broadway level bravado. To help ease the fears of his friends T.J. calmly said, "Whoa there Mikey, calm down. I'll be the first one to admit that maybe forcing Gus into saving our hides in the dodge ball match wasn't a good idea, he chose to step up after Lawson nailed poor hector with that ball and darn it he did good. Not only did he save our marbles but he brought justice to the playground. If anything he should feel proud of himself." the group looked at each others in an attempt to try and ease their collective guilt. True, the five never intended for Gus to feel so bad but that thought only made them feel worse because no matter how, they know that he was hurt. That is when it happened. The man who will change the destiny of this small town, the boy with three names. Shyshock, El Santo de la llama, and Miguel Rosales.
AN: So, here is the first chapter of my story. I found ir weird that there were no stories about el Diablo or how it may have changed the circumstances in the recess world. Please leave a review about how I did. I hope to update this during the upcoming summer. Also, I may need OC's and I like to make new ones for stories. If you have an idea for one that may fit in the story pleas either pm me or leave a review. Until next time. Shyshock signing off.
