Kaitlyn: Hey peeps! Some of you may be wondering, "Why on earth did she delete her former FMA fanfiction?" Well, the answer is I went into mortal depression after this person "The Helpful One" commented a long "constructive criticism" filled post on my last story. After reading all of it, I kind of gave up on my FMA fanfiction. But now, I'm re-doing it with all of her/his helpful tips. As much as I don't want to admit it, he/she did have some good points, so I'm going to put them into hard consideration. This time instead, I'm re-doing the entire story, character switch, setting switch, even how Edward and Alphonse met the character. So, please hang on with me; the lack of Kaitlyn's FMA fan fictions will pay off eventually.

BTW: The Helpful One, I "recommend" being a little less straight forward rude in your comments. I know its constructive criticism, but really? I'm 13 years old, and this is a FANFICTION. Not a flipping book or school report. I honestly could do whatever I want with my story, and I know my character is a Mary Sue. That's the point. Fan fictions in my opinion, are for fun. Not for being perfect.