Hello everyone. This is my first story, so please, leave a review and have some critism. Please, none that hurt my feelings. Seriously.
So, everything I write comes from my idea. I don't exactly own anything except for my ideas, and the stuff I stole from other writers and then twist the words around and can get away with. Now, to the story. Enjoy.
"Honey, get Fredrick!" Yelled the women, as she hurriedly held the other child. Her husband ran up to the tip of the boat, holding the baby Fredrick. "I love you, no matter what happens" The husband told the wife.
This was suppose to be there vacation, celebrating the birth of the twins Fredrick and Joseph. Instead it turned into their demise. The boat had hit and Ice berg, and split in half almost exactly like the Titanic. It was almost 989 years ago when the great mushroom war took place, terminating all humans. The boat they were on was the last boat of kellars, humanoid-like people who have been known for their great pride and heroism. The boat was over 6 times the size of the Titanic, carrying over 1000 people, 118 of which were kellars.
The water was rising to the top of the ship fast. Most of the people onboard were dead. Only the royals were allowed to take the lifeboats. Many royal families were onboard, including the candy kingdom. The 8 year old Princess, princess Bubblegum, was the first to take a lifeboat away with her family.
"We have to save the kids!" The father yelled to the mother, over the sounds of the ocean. She nodded, and the father handed her Fredrick, and ran to the railing. He reached over the edge, grabbed a drawer that was floating by, and ran back. He took off his white shirt, shoved it in for a bed-like pallet and took Fredrick from the mother. He kissed him on the forehead, while placing him in the drawer. "I love you Fredrick" He whispered, handing the drawer to the mother, taking Joseph. With Joseph, he ran to the railing again. He grabbed a skittle, and picked up a floating piece of blanket. He did the same thing he did with Fredrick, and went back to the mother. "This is it. This is were we go. Honey, put Fredrick in the water. He will be okay."
She was about to say something, but lighting struck the father. "No!" She yelled, almost dropping Fredrick. Joseph fell to the hard metal, next to the charred body of his father. The mother started running toward the body, but lightning struck again, but this time in the water. The mother had stepped into a wave of water when the lightning had struck, so she yelled in pain. She had dropped Fredrick in a mind-disabling pain. She fell to her knees, and died slowly as she watched her babies start to slide down the metal of the ship. They slid into the water, and floated off.
Sorry for the shortness of the chapter. I'm sure you can find forgiveness in your heart, because I will be uploading the next chapter soon. (Like, later today soon. Seriously)
This was written by Solar-Sickness on June 7th, 2013, in his bedroom on his computer, at 6:42 PM Central time. He does not own any characters except for the ones he came up with his mind.
