Exchange! Sorry but I've read my first chap... It was bad and I re-writed that... Hope It became better... Well as in all time, help:

"Thoughts"

-Normal speaking

Chapter 1

The Bad dream or the terrible truth?

Night. Dark cold night. The north came from shades of high trees which surrounding him. The teenager boy in orange armour looked at the full blood-red moon. "It's strange." thought small enterran. "The moon is white. Why is it red?"

-Mushra! -called someone with familiar female voice. Young purple-haired enterran having heard this shout turned back towards a girl that was as an angel for him.

-Yakumo! -called guy seeing the girl with long brown hair running in the forest. She has been frightened by someone in long black cape. The tall stranger pursued her without giving a chance of rescue to his victim. Human ran so fast as she could. Trying to hide behind trees Yakumo took a deep breath after long run. She was in a trap of malicious enterran. He could catch her at any time. The girl having heard dark laughter lifted her head and seen him over herself on branches. Having smiled stranger jumped off down. Mushra with fear and anger observed as his girl friend shouted in pain when sword of enterran broke off her body on pieces. With horror guy understood that cannot move. His body was been completely paralysed. He could watch and listen her last shouts only. "Why?" thought enterran trying to take a step. "Why I cannot move? Why I can not rescue her?"

-Because it's my world. -answered strange deep voice. The echo of these words pierced helpless Mushra's body having forced him to shudder.

-Who are you? -said enterran looking at darkness round him. Shades appeared from everywhere absorbing wood, the moon and trees. The dying girl too disappeared without having left anything. Everywhere there was only this darkness.

-You'll find out, Mushra. -answered the dark silhouette leaving from shades. It was that stranger that killed Yakumo. Creases of his capes was covered by blood.

-YOU ARE MONSTER! -cried small enterran with anger in his heart. -Why did you kill her?

The figure only smiled and said nothing. If only he could move, Mushra then would kill him for that. Yakumo was all for him. His angel, his hope. But body still did not answer to his orders. It was traped in cold and did not move. And not important hom many times he tried.

-You've saw only small part of my plans for this girl. -said the stranger with spiteful look. -But that is not that I wished to tell you.

Mushra begun to creak teeth frowning. "What he wants from me?"

-Just remember our meeting, Mushra. -asked enterran in black cape. -Because I'll be back soon and I'll take away that thing that belongs to me.

"I'll be back? The thing that belongs to him?" thought guy being in misunderstanding. "What is he talking about?"

Mushra had no time to finish his thoughts as strong mental blow thrown him out from the darkness. That he heard the last there was a deep dark laughter.

With shout Mushra woken up without having fallen from his hoverboard.

-Mushra! -called Yakumo nervously. -Are you all right?

-Yeah. -told Saago approaching her. -You shouted.

-I'm fine. -answered the boy trying to look normal. To tell the truth his mind was completely destroyed. Who was that stranger? What did he mean? Questions that have no answers killed small enterran.

-Are you assured? -asked big thick cat behind his back. Kittens lying on his shoulders looked at friends with great interest.

-Absolutely! -smiled Mushra from ear to ear. -Just hungry. He laughed rubbing his nape. Yakumo still looked at him mistrustfully. She was worried for the best friend. In the last time he became such strange. Always smiling now he was very serious. Since then they have found a human doll in the river. Mushra could not understand for what it's necessary. It irritated him a little. But it's not a reason to be such serious what he was only two or three hours back.

After such rough lifting Mushra with friends arrived to jungle. They as amicable command went on coast. They knew that if they wish to find people they must go on a current of the river. Yakumo took kittens to herself on knees and along with them went the first flying over a surface of water. Saago on pink scooter followed her. Kutal in his "fishcar" went on coastal greens. Travellers laughed and talked about their travelling. Estee joked about her favourite uncle. Ray and Sen looked at trees around. Only Mushra flied silently and having hung a head. He smiled when somebody asked him but inside he felt a strange cold. Like strange hands compressed his heart and did not release. That dream and that stranger were in his mind. Tall enterran which did not want to show Mushra his face. Who could it be? Maybe it's simple imagination? No. It all was as in reality. And that darkness... Mushra was assured that he saw that earlier. But where?

-Yes I was the one of the strongest enterrans in ours town. -spoke Saago proudly. -If you don't believe me ask Mushra, right?

Marine enterran looked at his fire friend which was deeply in his thoughts.

-Mushra! -called the young man. -Did you hear me? Mushra!

-Huh? What? -asked boy lifting head and looking at friend with interest.

-You're not with us. -said Saago injuredly. -Anywhere but only not here. Stop to think and tell to us that happened to you.

-What are you talking about? -asked teenager surprisely. -I'm here. With you.

-Only your body, not your mind. -answered that.

-I'm all right! -shouted fire enterran with anger. -And it's not your business that I have not answered for the first time!

-Mushra! -told reproachfully Yakumo. -How roughly. It's completely not similar to you.

-What? And you Yakumo? How many times I owe to tell you? I! Am! All! Right! It's over!

He risen on feet and flied away. His friends looked at his back with excitement.

-It's strange. -said Kutal turning a head to young woman. -It's absolutely not similar to him.

-Mushra is nervous? -said marine enterran having crossed hands on chest. -Sounds like joke.

-Maybe he tired. -assumed Yakumo lifting her eyes to friends. -We already spend a long time in travelling. Can we take a small break?

-Yes! -shouted kittens jumping up. Saago rolled his eyes thinking about his friend.

Mushra sat on branch of high tree ashore where he has found old ruins of the human building. He did not know that this is and decided to wait friends. Especially Yakumo who could to explain him all of this. The guy felt qualty for his roughness. "Why I've shouted at them? I should apologise. Eventually they are not guilty that I had a such bad dreams." thought boy and continued to wait. The teenager did not know that inside he started to change. His mind became older. His soul was traped in cold. Somewhere there within him one of the greatest enterrans of Enterra's history started to wake up. It was only the beginning. The beginning of the ending.

Well hope you like! ^^ R&R please!