The ribbonist arc

Hey you guys my first time writing a fan fiction so please comment leave constructive criticism. I'll try to spell right it was never really my thing so here goes, oh and yes I almost forgot…. I do not own bleach what so ever I'm just using the character names and setting. Enjoy!

Prologue

"bastard! leave her alone!"i yelled at the figure
"then hand over your power" it said "Can you assure the safety of him" i asked in a strained voice. "yes of course"
"DON'T YOU DARE LISTEN TO HIM!" she yelled i turned around and looked at her " i can hear his heart rate increasing hes lying! i dont care if i die!" she yelled at me "NO YOU CANT-
"DON'T be selfish!" she interrupted me "LET ME DIE! I was created to protect you as long as he lives you will be safe, please milady listen to me"she looked me in the eyes as a tear rolled down her face " you will be safe". i looked away from her as i made the worst decision of my life "N-NO!" i yelled shaking "fine that was your last choice"
snap
AAAAAHHHHHHH!
"NO!"

chapter 1
Another normal day in the seriete

I was doing what any normal teen was doing sipping a mocha frapicchino (yes a huge fan of those). I was day dreaming about any normal teen was dreaming about Mouse temptations by jello. Funny how I can eat this shit and not get fat. I'm not sure but I think all those calories go upstairs because other girls say "damn you are racked!"(Totally jealous!) I stop and think 'is there something wrong with me?' as I take a spoonful of nuetella sure enough Toshiro -Maki answers 'of course not Miss. Lulu-chizz' 'oh so your awake?' I reply 'I have been for a long time you just never answered' he said in thought. 'Well now I am so what do you want?' a long song followed my question 'Damn it! This is what happened last time!' I pause still no answer.

"STOP YOUR RUNNING AWAY AND ANWER ME!" I say aloud, gratefully no one was around. He finally speaks 'You're going to be asked…to be a vice captain again' my eyes widened 'by who' I asked 'Captain kuchki' Toshiro-maki answered 'doesn't he already have one? Abari Renji if I recall?' I questioned him

'He wants two'

'Are you sure about that?'

'Positive, he sent a hell butterfly right now to call you forth'

Right before my eyes came a hell butterfly. I touched it and Toshiro-maki read the message. 'Dear Miss. Lulu-chizz captain kuchki of squad 6 has called you forth to a meeting, address at once.'

I sighed "well this should be fun" I said still sitting down having no intention to go 'you should go' Toshiro-maki bugged "YEA yea I got it" I got up me and Toshiro-maki said together as one "let's go"

Ok so that was the end of chapter 1 I hope you enjoyed it so please review I promise chapter 2 will be wayyyyyy better its slow at chapter 1. I already warned you please check out chapter 2 that's when the fun begins.

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