Do not own Naruto
(edited chapter)
Half sight
Chapter 1
There was a small army on the other side of the bridge Sakura was crying over Sasuke's body which was in a death like state "ha and I thought It would be harder to kill you and that girl of yours Zabuza but now I don't see what I was so afraid of" said a small fat man who was looking at Haku's dead body "it really is a shame I bet my boy's could have put her to good use" the fat man said getting all three ninjas really pissed off
"hey kid can I borrow a kunai" the masked missing ninja said looking at where the happy blond should be but only to find empty space "umm where's the kid?" Zabuza asked right before they all heard screams coming from the bandits when they looked over they saw Naruto covered in a red chakra killing the bandits left and right "holy shit" was all Zabuza could saw "can I borrow one of yours Hatake" he asked at Kakashi threw one and he caught it in his mouth and charged towards the massacre.
Naruto had killed the last bandit that was between him and Gato who was trying to get on his boat "where do you think you're going fat ass" Naruto asked with a demonic voice "me I'm getting out of here considering you can't do anything to me" Gato said without nervousness in his voice "ha I just killed most of your men and what can I do" Naruto said a little curious "every one of the weapons those idiots had was covered in a heavy sleeping potion which should be kicking In now" he said as Naruto collapsed and he just chuckled
Zabuza and Kakashi had just finished killing the rest of the bandits that Naruto didn't kill "I didn't think that brat of yours had it in him Hatake" Zabuza said "neither did I" Kakashi said looking around for the brat in question "speaking of which where is he?" Kakashi asked "Sakura have you seen Naruto" Kakashi asked the pink haired girl who was celebrating over the fact Sasuke was still alive "Naruto why would I be worried about that dead-last" she said making Kakashi's eye twitch
"he probably got in over his head and got killed" she continues before continuing to smother Sasuke before from behind "Kakashi Haku she's alive" which startled Kakashi "come on we need to get her to the hospital" Kakashi said as he pick up Sasuke from the pink devil and both him and Zabuza rushed their students towards the hospital emergency room.
Meanwhile in an unknown area Naruto woke up to a barely lit room with a splitting headache "so you're up eh brat" came a voice he instantly recognized "Gato" he said "yes-yes we all know who I am but now I'm going to take out of you physically what you took out of me financially my two friends will make sure you don't get to comfortable" he said as two large thugs came into view "and if they do a good job they'll get a bonus" he finished as both thugs got really big grins on their faces and Gato just left as the thugs took out a few kunai "just don't kill him" Gato said as the steel door closed and the thugs started to attack him.
A few weeks later the search for Naruto was starting to look grim all the searching parties had come back empty even when Kakashi and Zabuza went to Gatos hideout they only found medic supplies and enough money to help restore wave Sakura was as always more concerned about Sasuke and didn't give a rats ass about Naruto while Sasuke for the first few days didn't seem to care but after a week he began to show worry about his missing comrade but the one who was most worried about him was Haku who everyone found out was a girl in the most embarrassing way in other words when the nurses were putting her into a hospital gown but Kakashi kept saying that Naruto would show up one day soon or that's what he got everyone to believe he was thinking only he knew what he was actually thinking but it was clear he was worrying but Tazuna was happy that his son got his courage back but sad that the one who had given it back to him was missing but continued to build the bridge.
During the time that happened Naruto was going under daily torture the thugs had taken his sight in his right eye by hitting him there with a kunai which he had figured out they took from him and he had met up with the kyuubi or the dumb fox as he called him he had also found out that he had been injected with something that disrupted his chakra flow the kyuubi had been trying to burn it out but he had only a small amount of interference which they had fixed
Flashback no justu: 1 week after capture
Naruto was showing signs of the mental stress of the torture and malnutrition the thugs were smiling evilly at the boy who was looking at them with pure hatred in his eyes "you know I don't like that look in his eyes o you pal" one of the thugs asked "yeah let's take care of it" the other said brining up the his kunai and bringing it down diagonally across Naruto's right eye as he let out a scream of pain before falling unconscious "ha seems like the kids out well I'm getting tired" one said before leaving
Naruto's mindscape
Naruto woke up to an unfamiliar dripping sound he got up and looked around he saw he was in a sewer in front of a large "so you're the brat I was put in" came a demonic voice that he figured was the demon "so this is my mind… WHY IS MY MIND A SEWER!!!!" he yelled out loud "you do realize that you can change it at any time right?" the voice of the kyuubi said "oh really?" he said as the sewer disappeared and became a field with only a Sakura tree but the cage was still there "hey cool" Naruto said jumping up and down "so why am I here fox?" Naruto asked
"well for starters you have just lost sight in your right eye" kyuubi said "what but then how come I can still see with both eyes?" Naruto asked in a surprised tone "because brat were inside your own head" kyuubi said in an irritated tone "and what else is it that you wanted to tell me?" Naruto asked "well there is a potion in your blood that has been making it impossible for you to use you're chakra and there is too much for me to get rid of with my current level of available interference" kyuubi said "huh?" was all Naruto could say because he had no idea what was going on
"because I'm behind a seal if you're poisoned I can get rid of it but only if there is a small amount and there is too much this potion for me to get rid of" kyuubi said "so then how the HELL AM I GONG TO GET OUT OF HERE!!" Naruto yelled at the kyuubi "there is a way but it will be good and bad the seal will be weakened and your strength will be increased 2X and I will be able to experience everything you experience" kyuubi said "so the only down side is you will have a bigger chance o escaping eh?" Naruto said "yeah that and you will have greater control over my chakra so instead of it turning you feral and you acting like a mindless animal you're appearance will stay the same and you're already high healing capacity will be increased" kyuubi said
"Alright how do I do this?" Naruto asked "see the paper with the word seal on it tear off the bottom part" the fox said as Naruto jumped up and tore off the bottom part he could now feel the power flow through him "it will still take some time but there won't be a scar on your eye" kyuubi said "good"
End flashback: time present
"Well-well let's get started now shall we" one thug said "sorry but I'm not the one that will be hurt today" Naruto said "eh yeah right boy" one thug said as he went to stab Naruto with a kunai but Naruto grabbed the thugs hand "you two are the ones that are going to die" Naruto said looking at them his remaining eye that he could see through was now crimson red right before his hand went through the thugs chest if someone were ever to find the ruins of the base
Back at the village Haku had finished healing and she and Zabuza had both been offered a chance to become part of Konoha they were about to leave "hey Tazuna if you find Naruto send us a message ok" Kakashi said "sure thing" the old drunk said as the team that had come to help left "you know Tazuna we should give the bridge a name" tsunami said "I know I know" Inari said "what Inari?" Tazuna asked "how about the great Naruto Bridge!" Inari said jumping up and down "how about it everyone" Tazuna said getting a large cheer from everyone
With the Kakashi and the group they were a good 50 meters away from the bridge and were Haku was wearing a pink kimono with her battle equipment underneath Zabuza and Kakashi were talking when they heard a rustling in the bushes they all got ready just in case when to their surprise Naruto came stumbling out carrying the head of Gato "Naruto" Kakashi said "oh hey sensei" he said before collapsing "Naruto!" Kakashi said running over towards his student who was still clutching the head of Gato in his hand when Kakashi got there "Naruto you ok?" he asked the barely conscious Naruto
"hey Kakashi I killed that bastard" he said as Kakashi turned him over and saw his unfocused right eye right before Naruto fell unconscious with a smile on his face "Kakashi-sensei why don't we just leave him I mean he'll only just hold us back" Sakura said causing the everyone's eye to twitch and everyone think 'must not kill talentless whore' before Kakashi picked up Naruto and the began to walk towards the village.
End chapter
If anyone is wondering I hate the younger Sakura so if anyone likes young Sakura this is not the story for you and Sasuke I'm not sure about how he'll turn out and the parings I'm not sure but it will either be one of the rare parings or an OC because whenever I write the usual parings like Naru/hina it always ends up crappy so until next time this is shadow of the abyss singing off
