Ok I have wrote things like this and magical creature descriptions for a while but I didn't think they were all that good. A friend recently convinced me otherwise so I wanted to see what you all thought of them. Review please and tell me if I should post some more of these or how I can improve them. Thanks and enjoy! :) oh and I don't own any characters that are recognisable.
She grinned. Her red lips parted slightly showing only a flash of white teeth. She stood around 6 feet tall without her heels and had a slim, curvy shape. Her scaly, green dress fit tightly accenting her curves and flattening her stomach. Slender fingers tapped an unsteady beat on her hips, the points of her deep green nails lightly scratching the skin. She had long, toned, pale legs that were only amplified by her dress and choice of 6 inch heels. The black sunglasses that covered her eyes seemed to mock and taunt the observer with a sense of need and curiosity that wouldn't leave them alone. Her flawless, pale skin shone in the light of the setting sun creating a red and orange hue to her skin and a yellow reflection in her dress.
"Are you sure you don't want to look in to my eyes?" She taunted elongating each 's' in to a hiss. Her forked tongue flicked out as she licked her lips. "We would like to stay with you forever."
As she was speaking one of her perfectly manicured hands came to her head and she pulled the brunette wig from her head revealing a bundle of acid green snakes that curled around each other. Each snake had pure white fangs that glistened with their poison. Their beady eyes all stared in the same direction as if there was one mind controlling them instead of each having individual thoughts. She giggled insanely and slid the sunglasses down her nose.
Transfixed by her aura and seductive luring I couldn't bring myself to look away from the eyes that I knew would be the death of me. At fist all I could see was two finely shaped eyebrows. Then Dark lashes flickered in to view, disappearing with every blink she took. The lashes got thicker and soon the top of her eye was visible. The green and red in her eye merged in to a series of swirls and intricately welded patterns; while the black of her pupil glimmered menacingly.
Even on my death bed I couldn't turn my eyes from hers and soon the icy feeling that had started at my chest spread outwards. I felt my heart stop first. Felt the steady, familiar beating I knew slowly die down until there was only ice. It moved on to my lungs next and as I took my final few breaths it became harder and harder to see the eyes I wanted to see so badly. The icy feeling continued through the inside of my body; freezing all feeling and leaving a hollowness that couldn't be filled. It left my brain but started to attack my skin. Down my fingers and up my arms it travelled until my head was the only thing left without a thick coating of stone. The woman- no monster- in front of me began to cackle. Her grinning face and insane laughter was the last thing I heard before the blackness became overwhelming and I succumbed to the peacefulness of death. Forever a statue, forever a trophy.
