hello every body im back with another fanfic. hopefully this one is better
for those of you wondering behind grey eyes is cancled sorry
oh ya Disclamer: I dont own avatar: the last airbender
review if you like
on to the story
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the beginning
They were going to face the firelord. They were ready.
Little did they know, it was all going to end wrong.
Aang Katara Sokka and Toph were on Appa. Suki and the Kyoshi wariors were riding in a ship on their left side, while Sokka's and Katara's dad along with a few water tribe warriors were in a boat on their right side behind them was a large earth kingdom and water tribe fleet. they were ready to fight in the war and finaly end it. they were ready for the 100 year war to finaly be over.
a small ship appeared infront of them. onbord the vessel was Iroh, and Zuko. "Any chance we can get in on the fun?" Iroh asked. they were accepted and joined to the right of the water tribe flank. They wanted for the war to end too.
the fleet soon met up with a fire navy brigade and made short work of them. when the fleet came apon the firelords island they started bombarding it, and sending out the collected warriors.
And so, our story begins.
"Aang," Katara shouted while pointing at the throne room of the palace. "We need you to defeat him!"
"Im on my way!" he yelled back.
Aang knocked out the guard in front of him with a well aimed rock, and created an air scooter that flew him to the next room. he arrived in the palace's throne room and found fire lord Ozai waiting for him
"So you and your puny resistance squad has come to defeat me, well your to late. Sozen's comet will be ariving soon." Ozai said
"What makes you so sure about that" Aang replied
"Because you are Sozen's comet" Ozia stated.
Outside of Throne Room
The rest of the gang was surrounded by the guards of the throne, which was not bad for them because they had Toph and Katara doing large sums of damage. The pikemen circling them had their spears sticking out, and apon a silent command they charged only to be knocked off track by a huge earth ramp and scattered about the room. Katara sent ice shards their way knocking them out. The firebenders from the left side of the room advanced, only to be frozen where they stood, their faces would have portrayed fear, but they could not move.
"Good work team," Sokka shouted, only to have his words lost in the giant burst of lightning that erupted in front of the group
"Well well look whos here," Azula sneered. She had Tylee and Mai at her sides. with an evil smile Azula shot a lightning bolt straight at the group, but it was blocked and Tylee was hit by a metal boomerang. Azula was buryed deep under ground and Mia was frozen.
Inside the Throne Room
"I've ben waiting for this for ages," Ozia said. "The spirit world is in tormoil, and the avatar spirit is being used to give me the ultimate power. The comet sent out 90 years ago was someone being sent into the spirit world.
"No!" Aang shouted, but his arrows and eyes were already glowing and he was hovering several feet above the air.
He was in the avatar state.
He flew through the roof encircled by a ball of fire. Than the whole roof was striped off and circled around him. the last thing he saw was the dissapointed look in Katara's eyes.
"No." he whispered silently "no."
The comet exploded and Aang was on the ground of the Throne Room wondering who he was, before he was taken away into a dark metal prisen
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thanks for reading please reveiw I need 2 reveiws to write a new chapter.
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