EDIT CHAPTER ONE! Thanks toTwisted Flame. He's helping me to correct my mistakes. Well,I forgot my english, but... now, i want to learn this language again.
The Last Hope
Chapter 1:
In the house's hallway, a young sinister-looking man strode along into a room where he wanted to going. He was the Master superme in the world. Avatars were afraid of him. He was the most powerful in the world : it was thanks to his parents that it. His father was a Whitelighter and his mother a witch, the famous Charmed One. His birth was very special. He was Twice Blessed Child.
This baby who, already owned many powers from his mother's stomach, has become a young man with fair-hair and greedy for powers. He didn't care about Bad and Good's notions. He wanted everybody to follow him and to agree with him anything for all. He liked to be called nothing but Lord Wyatt.
But Lord Wyatt was unsatisfied :warlocks, demons, and humans were alone who accepted him. None of good witches, Elders, Whitelighters and Avatars did and had been forced to take refuge in a room in the depths of the world. They had been led by a younger man with dark-hair who knew the Master very well. That man wasn't anyone for Resistance fighters : he was no other than his brother, the one who could challenge to him, because according them, he was as powerful as Lord Wyatt. His name was Christopher Perry Halliwell.
Unfortunately for them, Chris had decided to save his brother by going back to the past, but before his departure he had entrusted them with instructions about how to keep order and organization after Wyatt's rule ended.
That day, Lord Wyatt had arrived early once at a meeting in a dark room. That room was guarded by lower demons. The Master ordered them to leave and waited a moment before placing his hand on the handle but he heard some voices. Wyatt recognized these voices that were speaking about him:
"Really? He left you some instructions?" said a male voice, shocked.
"He had. Barabas, and in your side? Did you manage to weaken Lord Wyatt?" asked an other voice, annoyed.
"Progressively... Dear Gideon, are you impatient, aren't you?" answered Barabas, amused
"But of course! Lord Wyatt is dangerous for us and for avatars... for everyone!" exclaimed Gideon, indignant.
"I admit it, but let me have a few days. I'll use his greatest fear. He's getting weaker and weaker for me. Weaker than his brother, his family." snigged Barabas, in thinking Lord Wyatt's head, if he heard him.
"Fine, hurry up!" recommended Gideron, feel ill at ease.
"It isn't even necessary..." announced Lord Wyatt who chose that moment to enter in the room.
TBC....
Do you think it? If you interested by this story, i could continue to udpate... ;) Cornett