PART ONE | BEFORE THE FALL
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I'm rewriting this story as I didn't like how the original was going, please let me know what you think!
HARMARTIA
(NOUN) A FATAL FLAW LEADING TO THE DOWNFALL OF A TRAGIC HERO OR HEROINE
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GEMMA ARTERTON AS KALEETHA | "SHE WASN'T LOOKING FOR A KNIGHT, SHE WAS LOOKING FOR A SWORD" | THE FIGHTER
CLAUDIA BLACK AS TRINIGAN | "ABOVE ALL, BE THE HEROINE OF YOUR LIFE, NOT THE VICTIM" | THE MISGUIDED
TILDA SWINTON AS ARMELLE | "STAY STRONG. MAKE THEM WONDER HOW YOU'RE STILL SMILING" | THE TEACHER
KIERNAN SHIPKA AS WEYLYN | "LITTLE GIRLS WITH DREAMS BECOME WOMEN WITH VISION" | THE BELIEVER
YAYA DACOSTA AS NESRIN | "YOU ONLY LIVE ONCE BUT IF YOU DO IT RIGHT, ONCE IS ENOUGH" | THE SUPREME
ROBERT SHEEHAN AS PALO | "VISION IS THE ART OF SEEING WHAT IS INVISIBLE TO OTHERS" | THE HOPEFUL
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"LIFE IS PAIN, MY LOVE, AND IT'S A GREAT SHAME THAT A WOMAN WHO STRADDLES THE LINE BETWEEN VILLAIN AND HERO HAD TO TELL YOU THAT. ESPECIALLY BECAUSE YOU BELONG TO THE LIGHT THAT I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO ENTER"
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"THERE IS UNREST IN THE GALACTIC SENATE.
SEVERAL THOUSAND SOLAR SYSTEMS HAVE DECLARED THEIR INTENTIONS TO LEAVE THE REPUBLIC.
THIS SEPARATIST MOVEMENT, UNDER THE LEADERSHIP OF THE MYSTERIOUS COUNT DOOKU, HAS MADE IT DIFFICULT FOR THE LIMITED NUMBER OF JEDI KNIGHTS TO MAINTAIN PEACE AND ORDER IN THE GALAXY.
SENATOR AMIDALA, THE FORMER QUEEN OF NABOO, IS RETURNING TO THE GALACTIC SENATE TO VOTE ON THE CRITICAL ISSUE OF CREATING AN ARMY OF THE REPUBLIC TO ASSIST THE OVERWHELMED JEDI.
KALEETHA, A YOUNG ANGEL OF IEGO, HAS FELT DISTURBANCES IN THE FORCE BUT REMAINS AS HIDDEN AWAY AS SHE POSSIBLY CAN IN THE OUTER RIM OF THE GALAXY. THE RACE OF THE ANGELS HAS BEEN DEPLETED TO A FEW DOZEN HALF-BLOODS AND KALEETHA IS DESPERATE TO PROTECT THE ONES THAT REMAIN. HOWEVER, KALEETHA QUESTIONS HER DEDICATION TO THE LIGHT SIDE AS SHE BEGINS TO FEEL AN INDESCRIBABLE PULL TOWARDS THE DARK SIDE OF THE FORCE…"
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UNEDITED
Yikes, am I bad at updating any of my stories...but I'm rewriting my brief start of Hamartia so I hope you enjoy it. I just felt like the original was a sort of overused plot, where Anakin was in love with the OC instead of Padmé and it goes from there, almost identical to the movie. I wanted to try something new (and it might blow up spectacularly in my face).
~ Raven