Unwanted and Shattered

by ForeverSavior

When life finally seems to be working out for the flock, they're met with a new trial. One that seems like the only end is with someone's death. After meeting up with a new mutant by the name of Neon, they soon learn that there are other flocks out there. Ones that do not actually fear the school. -This is an update to the last version of Unwanted-

1. Welcome and Authors Note

So first off thanks for looking into this, I know if any of you read the old story it may seem a lil off. I was reading comments and reviews and one particular user said the story seemed to be off and having gaps. So I wanted to work on it and clear them up.

And that brought this to light, this is the update to Neon's story, this will follow the original planned story, but with plenty of new edits that will send it slightly different course. I also have made small edits to character details. Also due to an issue in my first picture of Neon, she now wears contacts. So first off, I've never worn contacts, I don't know if it's easy to tell if someone is wearing them or not. So for the sake of this story Neon will have her usual heterochromatic eyes, however, she will change to wearing green contacts later on. I wanted to make this note due to the cover image you will see.

By the way, the cover image is my work, Neon and her team does belong to me and Max and the flock belong strictly to James Patterson. I do not take any claims to owning them. This story doesn't take place after the story ends, it follows a different course. In this story the start would take place long before Fang actually splits and gets his own team.