This is my first fanfiction, but dont be nice for my sake. I need advice. Just bare with me.
BPOV
"BELLA"
Alice and I had known each other since we were used to keep her when we were young,her parents were always traveling. We grew up together, and we were best friends. On January first of every year we renewed our whole blood sister thing,and it was now only a few days away. Yes, the whole ya-ya sisterhood thing,(we cheated though,we only scraped off a cut until it bled) to be honest,it was did it ever year since we were twelve. And this year we were seventeen, and we both had our new year's resolutions boys. Not just any new boys,we wanted something that would last before college next year.
It was seven o'clock when Alice pulled up in that expensive yellow porsche of did I mention her parents were on business trips 'cause they're loaded? Yes,and Alice mostly used it for her car and of COURSE shopping! Alice had a problem when it came to shopping,but she couldn't be helped. It was a lost cause,she had an addiction Ok so I'm being dramatic but.
"Bella I want some rasberry ice cream lets go to the store"
It never got old drivin around in Alice's porsch in Forks. I mean it was always so strange,most people had vehicles closer to mine,closer to mine being .. on the verge of a break down. Either way Alice and her family had money. And like I said she uses that to her advantage:shopping and cars.
"Bella, Do you hear that"
"No.. What is it"
"I think something is wrong with the car"
She pulled over about five minutes from town. We were preety close to Forks grocery.
"Bella, I dont know anything about cars"
"Well can you still drive? We are only a few minutes away"
Just then a silver Volvo pulled up. We couldn't see who the occupents of the car were,the windows were tinted.
"Do you ladies need some help"
There were three boys and one girl that got out of the car. The girl in the back had beautiful long blonde hair and a body like a playboy bunny or something. She was holding hands with a huge bodybuilder, I mean he had to be a had brown curly hair and he was at least like 6'4. The guy in the passenger was preety cute. He looked like he might be the surfer type,they had all come close enough now and I could see he had deep blue eyes,and his hair was blonde and couldn't decide if it was wavy or curly. He seemed like Alice's type from the look on her face. I wonder how my face after I saw the Greek god come out of that passenger seat. He was the most magnificent creature I had ever seen in my life. Beautiful. His hair was like a bronze mop on his head,like he just woke up. He had the most peircing green eyes,like literally emerald diamonds. They had a sparkle to them for God's sake! And his body...was perfect too,lanky but not to much he looked to have some nice beceps and I'll bet you anything he had a six pack,if not like a 4 pack at least or something.
"So...DO you ladies need any help"
The body builder was the one who spoke and I could see he had deep brown eyes. It was Alice who spook.
"Yes, something is wrong with the car. I'm not sure if I can get it started"
"Well Rosalie why dont you go check it out"
The blonde girl looked up at us and smiled sheepishly before walking over to the car. These three men were right here and SHE was fixing our car? okay.
"So you girls headin' up town"
The blonde guy asked Alice more than me and she was the first to answer.
"Yes we were actually. We were just going to pick up a few things at the grocery store"
"Oh do you two go to Forks High"
The god asked Alice and I and again she was the one too answer.
"Yes! Are you guys all coming? Are you new"
"Yeah we are starting Monday our dad just got offered the job here, and our mom grew up here so we decided to move back. Let us introuduce ourselves. I'm Emmett Cullen"
"Jasper Hale"
"Edward Cullen"
They all shook our hands, and I sort of held on a little longer than necessary to Edward's or he did. I pulled away first. When we held hands it was odd, like electricity or something.
"It's nice to meet you I'm Alice Brandon"
"I'm Bella Swan"
They all smiled at us and nodded there I looked up at Edward he whispered something that sounded like Bella. Thats when he spoke directly to me, and that also when I noticed that his voice sounded like velvet.
"So Bella, have anything advice for me.. for this Monday I mean? What should I expect"
"Well what grade are you in Edward"
"Oh we are seniors"
I noticed Alice and Jasper had started a conversation and Emmett had joined Rosalie looking under the hood.
"Oh well you'll be in our class. Watch out for Mrs. Cope. She's.. a character. And Jessica Stanley and Lauren Mallory, they love fresh meat"
He laughed at what I said and I blushed.
"Well thank you for that. But I'm sure Emmett is safe from the girls. Rosalie can take care of that for them"
I laughed and she looked over at us and winked. She seemed nice, and I'm sure Alice will tell us of how we will all be best friends once we get home. Alice choose that very moment to ask how the car was coming.
"Rosalie, Hows my baby? Can you get her started"
"Well yes I think if you try and start the ignition it will crank"
Alice walked over to the driver's side and sure enough a second later the car started.
I waved to Edward before I walked away but he grabbed my elbow before I could take two steps.
"Wait Bella, Ill see you Monday right? You can help me from that Jessica and Lauren girl right"
He winked at me and the ever present blush on my cheeks returned.
"Sure Edward. Of course, Ill see you Monday"
Alice and I thanked them all and Rosalie in particular. We waved before driving off to the store.
"Well Bella I think we found our boys"
"Yes well.. I hope so.."
So thats the first chapter. I know its not amazing. I'm not a writer or anything so excuse my grammar.
Please review,even if you hate it. I need advice anyways.
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