Out of My League

Hey guys! This is just a random one shot that came up to me while listening to 'Out of My League" by Stephen Speaks. My first fan fiction, I hope you like it!

Okay, so on to the story...


Four POV

There she is. The Stiff who brought light to the darkness that had enveloped me ever since my father started to make me his personal punching bag. She brought out the best in me, I guess. I had never felt anything like this before. Changed me, that girl did. It was a good change.

And I love it.

I love everything about her – her techniques, her appeal, her stubbornness. She is so strong-willed that you can see it even if she's not speaking. It's about the way she moves, about the way she acts around people that you can see her Divergence. Kindness, intelligence, innocence, selflessness, and bravery – all in one girl. Why ask for more if you have her?


I am so proud of her. I had always been, and always will be.

She jumped first. She ranked first.

She was the first girl that I had loved with all my heart.

And yet, with all of the things she did to me, she was the first girl who broke me.


Sometimes I wonder how life would've been different if we both chose our former faction. We will most definitely be complete. I am sure my father won't approve of me seeing her, because she's Andrew Prior's daughter.

But she's more than that. She's more than all of the girls back in Abnegation combined. She's so simple yet so unique.

She changed the way I think about life - she added colors to it.

She changed my decision to live among the Factionless. She was the reason of my deferral.


Her smile, her eyes, her hair, everything's so recklessly perfect about her.

It was such a pity that she doesn't know that, though.

I love her with all that I am. I'm frightened to break her. I'm frightened that because of one wrong move, I will lose her. And I can't have that. I can't lose her. What would I do without my other half, anyway?

It surprises me on how right I am.


Of course, my selfless girl would do that. She would sacrifice herself for the ones she love.

I sunk on my knees as I will myself to wake up. I tried so hard to convince myself that I'm dreaming. I'll soon wake up next to the girl I love - the only family that I have.

But no.

I no longer will be hearing my name come out of her lips, creating a melody that nobody else could do.

I can no longer kiss her, make her smile, or hear her heart beat against mine.

Life's not worth living anymore.


I still see her everywhere.

In the Pit, in the cafeteria. On our spot in the chasm.

I never got over her at all. I still cry myself to sleep. She's long gone and I still can't accept it.

But I know that soon, I'll see her again.

I'll see her smile again, see her twinkling eyes.

Soon, we'll be together again, spending our forever, together.

I love you, Tris, and I will see you soon. We'll be together. Nothing will break us apart.


So that's about it!

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