Hello readers of fanfiction. This is my response to shadowstar91's challenge. I hope everyone will like it. So it's with great pleasure that I welcome all the readers to Naruto Uzumaki: Eyes Of Red.
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Naruto Uzumaki: Eyes Of Red
It was October tenth the day of the festival that celebrated the fourths victory over the Kuubi no Yoko. Also known as the nine tailed demon fox. This was the seventh festival celebrating said victory. Everyone was attending, well almost everyone. There were only eleven people who were not at the festival. One of those people was Naruto Uzumaki. The rest were people who lost some one to the attack of the Kuubi. Naruto always ran during the festival. The reason why was because every time he tried to go to said celebration he would get chased and beat by some odd number of villagers and ninja alike. The boy ran from shouts of demon and murderer, but this year the boy was faster than his pursuers. He ran some of the chasers would say like the wind. The boy ran and ran and ran until he could no longer hear the angry shouts. He stopped right outside the gates of Konoha. He looked back at the village and swore to himself that he would never go back there. Never go back to the hate and despite that he felt there. No from now on, he Naruto Uzumaki would no longer be held captive by that village. He would be a free man. So he turned his back on the village hidden in the leaves once and for all, or so he thought. Unbeknownst to our blond haired blue-eyed hero that Kami had different plans for him. Sure, this sent her plans back a bit but she could still fix it. Even if she had to go to earth and fix it with her bare hands.
(Weeks after Naruto left Konoha)
Naruto did not know how long it had been science he left Konoha. But he felt good about doing it. In fact every fiber of his being felt good. Well almost every fiber. There was just one part that did not feel good. His heart. He didn't know why, but something made him feel like he left his heart back in Konoha….
(Hyuga compound) Hinata Hyuga sat in her room, door locked, family installed privacy seals that blocked all sight and sound even from the Byakugan, face in her pillow, crying. Yes, she was crying. I mean you would cry too if the boy you admired (more like loved) declared his hate for his village and vowed not to come back. Why she admired this boy was for two reasons the first being know by only her. The second reason being only known by everyone in the Hyugaclan. To think that love could stem from something like being saved from bullies and a kidnapper all in the same day…
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Hinata Hyuga stood with her back to a tree three boys forming a semi circle in front of her. Well look what we have here, the boy in front of her said. Looks like we found ourselves a weakling that needs to be thought a lesion. A l-leson i-in wh-what, Hinata stammered out. She was scared and the boys knew that. That was what made picking on her so much fun for them. A lesson in pain, the boy to her right said. Hurry up guys, Hurry up guys, this time the boy on her left spoke, the man with the white eyes said only twenty miniuts. So we don't have long lets gust beat her up already. This scared Hinata even more. Her brother (she considered Neji a brother) left her to be beaten up by these boys. Just so, she could feel an ounce of his pain. The boys all advanced and when all hope seamed lost a boy wearing orange jumped in front of her. Now, now, a boy hitting a girl isn't nice, the stranger said. Perhaps you would like to hit someone who will be more of a challenge. She didn't know what the stranger did but whatever it was made the boys that were picking in her leave in a hurry, with shouts of don't let the demon kill, and save me from the demon. The stranger turned around to face her and ask if she was ok. When he did, she got a good look of his fetchers. He had blond hair, and the most beautiful blue eyes she had ever seen. She lost her self in those eyes. There was a rustling in the bushes and the boy left with a quick good bye.
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Then the second time he saved her had even more importance to it.
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Hinata sat on her bed thinking of the boy who saved her from the bullies at the park. Wondering if she would ever see him again. She was so deep in thought that she didn't hear her door open. She was forcefully forced out of her thoughts when a man put a cloth over her mouth and nose. Forcing her into unconsciousness. When she woke up again she could see the same boy from the park standing in front of her in a defensive position. She looked beyond him and saw a man on the ground dead from what looked like multiple cuts all over his body. She didn't want to believe it but because they were the only people alive in that clearing she had to. She had to believe that the boy in front of her killed that man on the ground. She watched as the boy turned around to see if she was ok. She expected to see his beautiful blue eyes, but instead of his blue eyes, there were red eyes in their place. Eyes that she could tell threatened pain to anyone that tried to hurt someone close to him. She didn't know why but she started to cry. The boy got on his knees and gave her a hug. Whispering about how sorry he was that she had to see him do that. She didn't know what he was talking about but found comfort in his voice any ways. When she finally stopped crying enough to ask him his name his eyes had turned back to his normal blue ones. What's your name, she asked her savior. My name is Naruto Uzumaki and im going to be the next hokage of Konoha. What's your name? m-my na-name i-is H-Hinata H-Hyuga, she replied. Flashback end That was why she was sad. The boy she fell in love with left the village all because she couldn't help him as he helped her. Love, she thought to herself. Where did that come from? She decided that she would ask her mother what love was later.
FIN
ALRIGHT READERS HOW WAS THAT FOR A FIRST CHAPTER. PLEASE R & R. BECAUSE WE ALL KNOW THAT THE LIFE BLOOD OF STORIES ARE RIVIEWS. THIS IS DARKLINKBLADE SAYING DON'T FORGET TO KICK BACK AND RELAX EVERY NOW AND AGAIN
