Natalie

One of a Kind

(Beginning of Breaking Dawn from Renesmee's Point Of View)

I'm somewhere warm and wet. I'm thirsty. It's hard to concentrate. I lay here and there is nothing for me to do. I take what I can, but there is not much. I'm waiting and waiting, for something, for anything. I'm getting weaker and I can feel it. I don't know how I can stop it. The only thing I have every day no matter what is my mother's love. My father and grandfather fear me and what I will become. One of my aunts finds that I'm only trouble and just gives her a headache and the other only wants me because I am the only thing she never had in life. And my mother's best friend wants me dead. I am the unborn child of a vampire and a human whose names are Edward and Bella.

I need blood but the only source is my mother. I can hear and smell outside my mother's womb, but not much. There are different smells, some so sweet and some more woody and earthy. Whenever I hear people talk about me they always call me 'he'. I'm not sure why. They talk about how dangerous I am to my mother, but she still loves me. They talk about how when I am born it will mean a war. That I do not understand.

All of a sudden I get this surge of energy. I am stronger and I can think more clearly. I have more blood. I am growing swiftly, very swiftly. I don't have enough room. I try to move but every time I do I hurt my mother. That is the thing I cannot bear. But I can't stay here much longer.

One day my mother was walking, something she did not do often. Suddenly she reaches down as I am reaching up. I cannot breathe anymore and I need to. I just try to get out. People are screaming. I'm almost gone, almost dead, Then all I see is light.

I can see everything, and I can breathe. I see a man and now right away he is my father.

"Renesmee" He breathes.

I hear a voice behind me and know it's my mother. "Let me . . . ," She croaks. "Give her to me."

I am laid across her chest and I look at her. Her hair is in a knot and her face is white and bloody. But she is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen or imagined. I smile. And all of a sudden the smell of her blood is too much, and I bite her. Then she is gone.

I can't see her now but my father is holding me and tells me "No Renesmee"

I hear a voice, a beautiful low voice saying, "Give her to me"

There is snarling and I am in the arms of a beautiful lady. I suddenly recognize that voice. That is my aunt. But the way she looks at me I do not think that she just wants me for a prize anymore. She carries me down stairs and grabs a metal bottle. She sits down with me an puts the bottle in my mouth. I drink and I now have blood.

Someone starts walking downstairs with heavy feet. I keep feeding. My aunt lifts me and I can suddenly see him. He is perfect. He is mine. I see him look at me and suddenly we know we are perfect for each other. He is mine and I am his. The half vampire who is meant to be with the werewolf that is my mother's best friend who would of thought.

I hear something upstairs. A racing heart. I know something is changing.

This is my life. The pain. The confusion. The love. This has been my life since the very first day.

This is my first story. Tell me what you think