First Brokeback mountain fanfic. I'm not sure about this one, but I might as well.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
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"Lureen…" Jack whispered in awe as he gazed down at his fiancée.
"JACK!" She yelled as she gripped his hand tighter. "You're gonna pay for this, you mark my words, Jack Twist!"
"Almost there…" Jack encouraged.
"One more!" The midwife instructed.
"I can't!" Lureen cried. "I'm done…"
"C'mon, Lureen!" Jack begged. "Once more…"
"Don't dare tell me what to do…" Lureen warned through grunts.
Jacks eyes glittered as he leaned over and pressed his lips over Lureen's. He watched as an odd look came over her delicate features. He's never seen it before…
As if she was…proud of him. A mix of pride and shock.
"Once more…" He whispered.
Lureen took in a deep breath and pushed once more, an ear shattering cry filled the room.
"It's a boy!" The midwife cried, grabbing the baby from beneath Lureen's legs.
Lureen collapsed back down on the bed, her chest heaving deeply. Weakly she lifted her hand to wipe the sweat off her forehead.
"You better be damn happy I love you so darn much," Lureen whispered. "'Cause if I didn't, I'd shoot you for makin' me go through that."
"I reckon you broke my hand." Jack complained.
Suddenly, a bundle of blue blanket was placed up against Lureen's chest, and immediately, her face softened.
"Ain't he the most precious thing you've seen, Jack?" Lureen whispered.
"Very pink for a boy, I'd say." Jack teased. "But good all the same."
"Oh Jack," Lureen chuckled.
"I wonder…if we have a girl, would she turn blue?"
"No way, Jack." Lureen protested. "We got someone to take on the family name, and that's it."
"Whatever you say, darlin'…" Jack smiled.
A small pause went through during with the two new parents started at their child.
"Bobby…" Lureen whispered.
"Who's that?"
"He looks like a Bobby, don't he?" Lureen asked.
"Sure does…" Jack smiled. "Bobby Newsome-Twist."
"Look, Jack!" Lureen exclaimed softly. "He's got your nose!"
"He does, don't he?" Jack examined closely.
"Bobby…" Lureen cooed. "Hold him, Jack."
"Naw…" Jack shook his head. "I might drop him or something…"
"Jack, please!" Lureen begged weakly. "I'm mighty tired."
"Lureen…"
"Jack!" Lureen cried quietly. "I just got something the size of a melon out of something as big as a lemon. I don't need do protests!"
"Fine…" Jack reached over hesitantly.
The minute Bobby left Lureen's arms, she fell asleep.
Bobby gurgled up at Jack.
"Bobby…" He whispered. "Bobby Del Mar."
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Probably not as good as the many I've read here…but it's an attempt.
Please review.
xoxox
Haaazel