/Alright. This is my first story. Please give me some reviews on it.
Metal City. The Blader and the second oldest of the Unabara brothers known as Ryuu was walking along the street. His legendary like bey known as Star Pegasus in his right palm. The scarf that resembles something like Gingka Hangane was following through the winds. As, he was on his way home to meet his both his brothers. As always. Ryuu had a bad habit of over doing it in bey battles. But, this seem not to affect him all that much. Soon enough. He would reach towards the house which his brothers would surely be in. That's wmen, Ryuu would open the door slightly. Only to notice. Kite standing near the door. With Eight with him."Oh, man. Am, I in trouble again, Kite?" Ryuu said in a bit worried tone towards his older brother. Both arms crossed over his chest. As, Kite would respond to Ryuu's comment."Yes, you are Ryuu! Didn't I tell you before? You need you're rest. Last time. You almost ended up dead." Kite said yelling at Ryuu a not more intensely than he normally would. That's when, Eight would also join the conversation as well."You should listen to Big, bro more often, Ryuu... You always do these kind of things." Eight had said in a somewhat worried tone towards, his older brother Ryuu.
"Not, you to Eight! Fine... I'll stop training for awhile."
/Sorry if this was short. I was, just getting use to all this writing. Oh, and Li-Chan is my best freind btw. Hehe.