The Minus world

written by Jetpack34

I just want to let readers know that I do not know own the Mario characters. but anyways on with the story.

Chapter 1 Enter the minus world

Outside Peach's Castle. Peach, Daisy, Mario, Luigi, Wario, Waluigi, Toad, and DK were having a BBQ.

Peach: how's the Burgers going Mario?

Mario: there looking good. (Mario who is at the grill cooking)

at the table, the others were waiting for the food.

Daisy: So Luigi, why Yoshi can't make it to the BBQ today?

Luigi: he is sick.

DK: thats too bad. (just to let readers know I'm making DK talk in the story, but back to the story)

Wario: so what if the green dino could not make it.

Waluigi: and he eats way too much sometimes.

Peach: Wario, why do you got to be careless sometimes!

Toad: hey Mario hurry up with the burgers!

Waluigi: were getting hungry over here!

Mario: chill out!, there almost done.

soon afterwards Mario took the burgers off the grill and put them on a plate. Mario was walking towards the table where everybody was at. until a fireball which almost hit Mario, which Mario dodged.

Bowser: dang it Mario!, why do you got dodge my fireballs?!

Mario: not you again Bowser?!

Peach: why can't you just a take hike and buzz off!

Luigi: just go back to your castle spike shell!!

Bowser: I'm not going anywhere without the princess?

Luigi: your not kidnapping Daisy!

Bowser: I don't want her, I want Peach.

Daisy: are you saying I'm not cute?! (Daisy who was now mad!)

Bowser: no, I'm just saying I rather kidnap Peach, then you.

Daisy who was now angry, walk towards Bowser.

Daisy: well you know what spike head, you are a mean monster!

Bowser: thats it! prepare to be fried!

DK and Luigi ran over to where Daisy and Bowser were at.

DK punched Bowser which caused him to fall on the ground. Luigi went over to Daisy to calm her down.

Luigi: you okay Daisy?

Daisy: I'm okay now.

at the table with Mario and the others.

Wario: I thought Daisy and Bowser were going to fight?

Waluigi: I know, Daisy is the one person you do not want to tick off.

Peach: you said it.

Mario: well its a good thing DK was there, otherwise Daisy would of been fried.

Toad: I'm glad there okay.

Mario, Peach, Toad, Wario, Waluigi were walking towards the group, until the ground started shaking.

Peach: whats going on?

Mario: don't know but it does not look good!

Wario: the ground is SHAKING!!

Waluigi: its a earthquake!!

Toad: run!!

Peach: that can't be, there hasn't been an earthquake here for over a thousand years!!

Bowser: whats with the skaking?!

Luigi: lets get out of here!

Daisy: I agree lets get out of here!

DK: well lets go!

before anyone could run, the ground opened up a portal, everyone fell in the portal.

with Mario, Daisy, and Waluigi. they just woke up.

Mario: where are we?

Waluigi: I don't know, but where is everybody else?

Daisy: good question?

Mario: well we should look around.

Waluigi and Daisy: okay.

Mario, Daisy, and Waluigi were walking until they saw a castle that looked like Peach's castle.

Mario: isn't that Peach's castle?

Daisy: it looks like it.

Mario and Daisy were about walk towards the castle, but Waluigi stoped them.

Waluigi: hold up, something does not look right about the castle, and the sky.

Mario and Daisy looked at the sky and saw dark clouds with lightining over the castle. then they looked at the castle, it did look like Peach's castle, but the castle was Black and pink instead of red and white.

Mario: your right Waluigi.

Daisy: this castle looks creepy and scary.

Waluigi: what world did we end up in?

with Luigi, Wario, and Peach, they just woke up.

Luigi: where are we?

Peach looked around to see where they were at until they spotted a castle that looked like Bowser's, but the castle looked nice and not scary, and the sky was blue, instead of a dark sky.

Peach: say guys, when did Bowser's castle looked so nice and not scary?

Wario: what world did we end up in?

Luigi: good question Wario?

Peach: I wonder where every one else is at?

with Bowser, Toad, and DK

Bowser, Toad, and DK just woke up after falling into the portal.

Toad: hey guys were at the Mario bros.

Bowser: how did we end up here?

DK looked at the the house, there was a sign on the house that did Mario bros home. but the house looked real scary just by looking at it. the house was red and black.

DK: wait a sec guys, something does not look right about the house.

Bowser: this does not look the Mario bros I'm use to seeing.

Toad: what world did we end up in?

end of chapter 1. what world did Mario and his friends end up in? find out in chapter 2. don't forget to send a review.