Songs from the Review Section
Chapter 1: Love Blitz
A.N: The songs that are the subject of this chapter come from what I assume is called Love Blitz… or Blitz Lovers… anyway, all the reviews containing these songs have 'Blitz' in their titles and I'm pretty sure it's an Elsanna. The premise appears to be that Elsa's ice powers were far more controllable, but Anna has uncontrollable fire powers.
The story is far darker than Frozen, and features an Elsa who's an attention whore, scared of Anna, and bullies Anna because she's a threat to Elsa's throne (though, to be fair, she feels rotten about it and wants to make amends), and an Anna who's basically the Evil Elsa from earlier in the film's production, and hates Elsa because Elsa got all the attention and love while Anna was ostracized. Anna blames Elsa for stealing their parents' love.
There were two scenes in the reviews that weren't songs, but I didn't think they were worth keeping. The first one basically explains why Elsa and Anna hate each other, and the second one is the scene where Anna yells at Elsa during the coronation, tweaked so Anna accuses Elsa of stealing their parents' love and attention.
The songs are actually pretty good, though I would not recommend the story (if any of you can find a full version of it- I couldn't find anything more than the snippets in the reviews) if you don't like grimdark (or prefer the canon versions of Elsa and Anna). But if that's your cup of tea, go right ahead. And if you find it, please tell me. I really want to know if somebody actually went to the trouble of writing decent original songs in order to spam my review box, or just took it from a person with better writing skills.
If, by any chance, the original writer of these songs sees this and wants me to take them down, I'll comply. But first, I'd like to compliment you on some really good songwriting skills. Have you considered going pro?
Here are the songs, in chronological order according to what canon songs they replace:
Lullaby Flame Princess (Love Blitz, Original song, perhaps replaces Frozen Heart)
Fate has been cruel and order unkind But into the stillness I'll bring you a song Once did a girl who shone like the snow So great was her pow'r and so radiant her beauty Lullaby flame princess, goodnight sister of mine Carry the peace and the coldness of night Soon did that princess take notice that others But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly Lullaby flame princess, goodnight sister mine Carry the peace and the coolness of night The years now before us May these many winters
How can I have sent you away?
The blame was my own; the punishment, yours
The harmony's silent today
And I will your company keep
Till your tired eyes and my lullabies
Have carried you softly to sleep
Look out on her kingdom and sigh
She smiled and said, "Surely, there is nobody
So lovely and so well beloved as I"
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and night passed
And rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth
Through cloud, and through sky, and through space
And carry my sorrow in kind
Anna, you're loved so much more than you know
Forgive me for being so blind
Did not give her sister her due
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew
Takes hold of the mind of it's host
And that foolish girl did nothing to stop
The destruction of one who had needed her most
And rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth
Through cloud, and through sky, and through space
And carry my sorrow in kind
Anna, you're loved so much more than you know
May troubles be far from your mind
And forgive me for being so blind
Fearful and unknown
I never imagined
I'd face them on my own
Swiftly pass, I pray
I love you; I miss you
All these miles away
Sleep...
For The First Time in Forever or For the First Time in Forever Reprise [Can't be sure which one it is] (Love Blitz Anna)
Anna: The kingdom is mourning, Yes, they gave birth to me, I'll be walking freely down the street, 'Cause for the first time in forever, Who are you? Tonight imagine me with a smile They all will come from my hand Although it's weird that I'd be smiling My powers aren't a curse;
but I don't care!
I don't care if they hate me
Or curse or stare
'Cause with them gone
I'll finally be free!
But so long ago they abandoned me,
So why should I pay them any heed?
With no fear, isn't that strange?
But, wow! Am I so ready for this change!
I don't have to wear a mask
'Cause for the first time in forever,
I don't care what they might ask!
And what are you going?
Why are you so happy?
'Cause for the first time in forever,
I can finally be me
That lights up the land for miles and miles
And fireworks that decorate the sky
And they will be under my command
And nobody can tell me that I can't!
When everyone else is grieving
But believe me when I say
It's all okay!
'Cause for the time in forever,
I'm not ashamed of who I am
'Cause for the first time in forever
I'm not afraid of her or them!
They're a blessing!
And everyone will soon see!
'Cause for the first time in forever,
I'm glad to be me!
Elsa: I can't believe Elsa: May they rest in peace Anna: Don't care if they rest in peace! Elsa: I miss you, Anna, please... Anna: I won't miss them at all! Elsa: They're gone now, please, come back home to me! Anna: Now I'm free! Anna: For the first time in forever Elsa: We'll rule together, just you and me! Anna: I'm getting what I've dreamed of Elsa: I'm sorry, please, just hear my plea Anna: A chance to be seen with love Elsa: Come home Anna: A chance to prove my worth Elsa: I'm so alone, please come home! Anna: And although I'm still a misfit
That I'm right back here
The very ground from all those years ago...
Breathe in, control
I'll be alright
It's not like they were there for me anyway...
They'll all see it, the real me!
'Cause for the first time in forever
'Cause for the first time in forever
I'm finally set free!
Let It Go (Love Blitz Anna)
The lava rock burns hot under my feet Don't let it grow Let it go, It's funny how some distance Let it go, I'm finally in a place that's mine and mine alone Let it go,
Not a living soul to be seen
A kingdom of hate and destruction
And it looks like I'm the queen
The smoke is rising threatening to choke me alive
Couldn't put it out, heaven knows I've tried
Don't let them see
The blazing fire
That consumes me
Conceal, don't feel
Don't let them know...
Well, now they know!
Let it go
Can't keep it in anymore
Let it go,
Let it go
Turn away and slam the door,
I don't care
If they hate me
Let the fire burn on
The heat never really bothered me
Makes it easier to breathe
And the fear that was once my enemy
Is nowhere to be seen
It's time for me to take charge
Of my own life, of my own heart
No right, no wrong
No rules for me!
I'm free!
Let it go
And I'll shine like the brightest star
Let it go,
Let it go
I can't believe I've come this far
Here I stand,
And here I stay
Let the fire burn on...
No more hiding in my sister's shadow all alone
Here I'm the queen and no one can stop me!
I'm never going back,
That door is closed for me
Let it go
And I'll rise like the sun at dawn
Let it go,
Let it go
That useless spare is gone
Here I stand
In the sweltering heat
Let the fire burn on!
The heat never really bothered me...
Fixer Upper (Love Blitz Elsa)
Tell me, Elsa, is it because she always talks? And although she can be a lot of fun So she's a bit of a fixer upper, Yeah, she's a bit of a fixer upper, but we know what to do! So tell me, dear, is it the way burns and scares Are you feeling a sharp pang of fear So she's a bit of a fixer upper, So she's a bit of a fixer upper, but we know what to do! "But there's no way she'll forgive me... she's way too stubborn!" So she's a bit of a fixer upper, So she's a bit of a fixer upper, We're not saying you can change her, 'cuz people don't really change Everyone's a bit of a fixer upper, that's what it's all about! Father! Sister! Brother! We need each other to raise us up and round us out
Or she skips instead of walks
Or the squishy mushy weirdness of her heart!
She sometimes ends up melting someone
But you'll never meet a girl who's as sensitive and sweet!
So she's got a few flaws
Like her clumsiness
Or her fiery powers
That's a bit outside of nature's laws
We can fix that upper by her making up with you!
Or that she's socially impaired
Or that she likes to disappear in poofs of smoke!
Due to her ungodly powers
Or the fact that she's so warm that you're afraid you'll melt!
So she might be a bit bugged
Her enthusiasm
Is just confirmation
Of her desperation for healing hugs!
That fixer upper can be fixed by being best friends with you!
That's a minor thins
Her cold de-meanour can be broken by love
And besides, we can still persuade!
But see here, Snow Queen
We make even the coldest hearts feel the warmth of love within!
We're only saying that's love's a force that's powerful and strange
People make bad choices if they're mad, or scared, or stressed
Throw a little love their way, and you'll bring out their best
True love brings out their best!
Everyone's a bit of a fixer upper, but when push comes to shove
The only thing to fix up a fixer upper is true, true, true love!
Original- Seems to refer to cut song More Than Just the Spare
"I'm not part of the town, not born to be queen, For I've finally found my place, among the sun and the fun I finally have something to call on my own She's the scholar, athlete, poet!" So I'll never be the heir? Who cares! No longer will I be known as the "spare" I'm not the useless little sister "So I'm just the second born sister, She'll never be the girl I am
Just somebody hopelessly in between..."
That's what I used to say but now I see
There are many things that I am that she'll never be!
She may be the queen over ice and snow
She may be the queen of the home I know!
But now I see that I'm queen of the things that really matter
Like warmth, sun, summer fun and laughter!
She has a cold heart, but mine is warm and welcoming...
Who cares if "queen of fire and summer" isn't a real thing?
No more cold and neglect in my hime
The flowers sing with my touch
They fly, the bees and the birds and such
Can she do that? Can she warm up their hearts?
No she can't!
She also has flaws, mistakes and quirks
Much like the rest of us dirt
She believes us to be...
The title "queen" is just a formality
With added chores and responsibilities
That I'll never need
The poor neglected maiden fair
Just a tool to be used for their diplomatic affairs
No more, no more, no more!
I'm the wonderful princess who brought back summer
Breaking the curse of eternal winter
That my "perfect" sister caused!
Whom most of the town ignores..."
No I'm not!
I'm the one
Who saved my kingdom from famine
From hopeless destruction
And frozen fear
Just like I'll never be who she is
But I've finally learned to love myself
The people now love me for just being me...
I can't hide it anymore,
This is who I am!
This is who I... Am!