Hey guys I know I've been very, very, very inactive for a whole year, and to make it up to you I'll be posting a new and well edited chapter to this story. I really like the idea of the plot where the story was heading so I'll continue it instead of deleting it. So hope you enjoy the new and improved chapter. Enjoy.
There was once a teenage girl named Maka Albarn, her parents being Spirit and Kami Albarn. She was only child so she didn't know what it felt like to have sibling around with her and share toys she never did let that slow her down. Her father would always spend time with her whenever he could and would read books to her since Maka loved to read and learn new things. When she got older, Maka had an appearance that resembled a pure angel that had fallen from the heavens gate. She was as agile as a cat and had beautiful soft skin that would make someone crave to have her skin. She had sandy blonde hair that shone as bright as the sun, and had magnificent mile long legs that looked breakable, but had a lot of brute strength. What really made Maka an eye catcher was her emerald colored eyes that shinned so bright it would make the brightest star jealous. Maka had slight curves and has small breasts, but despite all that someone would describe Maka's personality as courageous, brave, determined, or fearless, and all of those are true. Maka was very honest and always stuck to her promises and was very independent even in the roughest of times.
She had a what appeared to be a beautiful family, and a good one at that.
The average people who didn't know her that well would say that she was a lucky girl to have a caring family. They would also say that she never had any trouble, but they were only looking at her from the outside. No one knew or took the time to look into the truth behind the whole story of Maka's life. No one truely understood Maka. In fact Maka's world was different from what people think or expect. On the outside, Maka pretended to appear like a normal teenage girl, but in fact she was more than that. Whenever school was over, most people would be happy or excited that school had ended, but not for Maka. She was always terrified to go home or anywhere that involved her family. Always when she gets home, her father would beat her and do other evil and despicable things that no one could imagine a father doing to their daughter. Sadly, Maka didn't have a mother to protect her anymore because ever since Maka was seven years old, her mother disappeared without a trace. No note, letter or word was said when her mother disappeared. The only reason how they knew she was gone was because all of her belongings were gone and Lord Death couldn't sense her soul's wavelength within Death City.
Maka cried for days begging and praying for her mother to come back or to at least taken her with her. But after that day things began to worsen for Maka.
Lets just say that poor Maka never had a good life like everyone thought.
OK I'm aware that this is too short, But I'll do my best to make the next one as long as I can. So Fan girl OUT and please comment and tell me what you think.