Sorry but when I really sat down and read it it kinda needed a complete redo so here it is

"Thoughts"

"Speech"

"Pokespeech"

Lendaries have bold underlined names while people just have bold and italic names. Bold seach just mean that it was very expressive

Xenolis POV-

"Finally a world where no one will notice that a who race just came down. SO … better start the landing or else people will notice. Thourgh who I don't … huh ehe must be nothing? I said shaking off the feeling as if I were being watched. So began the longest day in ALL of history.

? POV-

"Hey, look an opening in the forest!"

"ASH! Don't run away!" yelled Misty, May, Dawn, Iris and Serena at the same time.

"Once something gets into Ashes mind you can't stop him." moaned Brock

5 minutes later …

"Ash seriously stop running away from us like that!" Said Misty.

"Leave here, danger abound. " Whispered the wind

"Huh, what was that?" Asked May and Max at the same time

Then the loudest bang imaginable accompanied by a small earthquake happened. The after roar continued as if it wasn't just a disturbance. It was if it was like 20+ starships just entered the atmosphere without exiting jump space beforehand. As the sound slowly subsided, the look of horror on their faces as they saw Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, and Arceus confronting this thing in the sky

Xenolis POV-

"Finally no one around so let's rip open the gate way to allow my people to come down."

With that I opened the portal to let my people onto this "uninhabited" world, but then Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, and Arceus. "just great..." i thought as I looked on at them in my void form( think of a giant Rayquaza but gray and silver.

"Leave now or face the consequences!"Arceus yelled, which was heard all over the world.

"NO." I said defiantly "No this will not be the end of me or my people they will come and we will overthrow you"

"The we will have to destroy you and "your people" won't we Dialga" said Giratina

Transforming to show my true form I immediately released attacks that would counter Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, and Arceus (Spacial rend, roar of time, judgment, and shadow force respectively of course).

"WHAT ANOTHER ONE!" I heard right before the attacks were released.

It was to late Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, and Arceus were now vaporized. As I felt the entire universe become unstable I took the place that Arceus once occupied I summoned them from the deep void and the colonization of this world began. Now who yelled out as I took human form (Trench coat, military boots and a fedora). "Oh it's him." As I saw Ash. "What to do to him, torture for eternity … no, turning into a ghost … no too kind. OH I know" I started to charge up a hyper beam just as the first ships came out of the void. then I proceeded to blast ash into the next universe, but since he can't survive the trip, so disintegrated mid transfer. Then i heard the familiar cries of my most powerful children.

"So they came to my call" I thought as MY legendaries came through the portal "So you have returned to me children after all? Hem I thought you never come back after what I did to our world"

"This is the world you choose to colonize with the survivors" said Giratina

"Yes this world will work their is 3 spots where we can fill in." said Palkia, Dialga

"So are we going to do this or what?" said Giratina

"Let's start to unload the people" I said

Okay that is the end of this chapter the kill count so far is Ash, Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, and Arceus. Also all of Xenolis legends are shineys. Please comment and fav/follow.