Trying out the Superboy character, I fell in love with the series a few days ago. Sorry about the punctuation I suck at it. If I can get the other characters personalities right I might have a semi-decent story. please tell me if you think he's to wangsty. I think I overdid it and please be as harsh as you can while still being constructive.
I forced myself to look into the foggy mirror, I looked exactly like him, I sounded exactly like him too. I was him in almost every was, I was his "son".
I scoffed at the thought, he wasn't my father; I was just a test tube accident that he didn't want. I could understand a little over reaction but he completely ignored me, no matter what I did. I finally couldn't take it anymore and slammed my face into the mirror, I was tired of looking at him; I angered myself because I was exactly like him and less, a simple clone, a son he never wanted.
I walked into the bedroom locked my door so no one could enter, I fell down on the hard bed. I blocked out the people knocking on my door asking what happened, damn thin walls… I pulled a pillow over my head to help block the sound, even though it barely did anything it helped. I wanted to separate myself from superman as much as possible.
I drifted to sleep.
"Fuck everything." was my last thought before dreaming.
I liked dreaming. I dreamed I could actually fly, I dreamed I had a real father. I always woke up when I didn't want to. And because of that I liked to sleep a lot. I was always well rested but always a bit sluggish but still able to hold my own, as I should be, I can't allow myself to be defeated.
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"God, what is that terrible noise?" Kid Flash asked, hearing the sudden string of terrible rock music pouring from the tv in the main hall.
"Megan is watching some religious music channel." Robin said, "Here, catch." he tossed KF some earplugs.
"So what are we up to?" KF asked.
"You, Stephanie, Megan and Kal are going to go catch Harley." Batman said from the corner of the room where Kid Flash didn't notice him.
"So superman is staying with you until we find a more permanent home?" Robin asked.
"Yeah, He's staying in my room, we've been having pillow fights, hell we even went on a shopping spree!" KF Joked.
"For the time being at least, he will have a place to stay while this team is active but that can't last forever." Batman added, "I'm trying to get Superman to introduce him to the family that raised him, it's not the first time that they had taken care of another person like Superman."
"Poor Supey." Kid flash said. "Well I'll go get Megan, Stephanie" KF said her name like a child would say a girl he thought had cooties "and Kal." He finished and dashed off.
"Why isn't Clark helping Superboy?" Robin asked with a slight frown on his face after KF was out of earshot.
"He may be a great people person but he lacks parenting skills, plus Superboy isn't entirely his clone." Batman explained.
"Poor Supey." Robin parroted.
Revised at Last!