This is my first Naruto story, enjoy, please tell me what I could do better :)
I have rewritten these two chapters and will upload more I hope haha.
*-are sfx
˝Naruto˝-human talking
´Naruto´-human thinking
˝Naruto˝-tailed beast talking
´Naruto´-tailed beast thinking
˝Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!˝-jutsu
*Booom!* Explosions, everywhere. Everywhere you looked were collapsed buildings sizzling with fire. The ear-piercing screams of pain and sorrow from the shinobi and citizens and the cries of children calling for their lost parents or siblings were almost being overpowered by the monstrous roars from the heart of the village.
˝kā-san, kā-san! Please wake up! Kā-san please! ˝
A boy with brown hair wrapped in a ponytail, dark eyes and a scar that ran across the bridge of his nose, wearing mesh armor over a now dirty beige short-sleeved shirt and tight green pants and standard shinobi sandals was holding a lifeless body in his arms.
˝Cat! Get the boy to safety! ˝ yelled a man dressed in his combat attire, that consisted of a black jumpsuit, underneath it mesh armor, a gauntlet to protect his forearm and an armored
hood with a bandanna-like forehead protector bound to his head by two long straps.
˝Right away Lord Third! ˝ answered the ANBU-nin with the cat pattern on her mask, leaving the other two members of the team she was in to protect the man. Yes, this man was none other than the third Hokage, the predecessor of the current leader of this village. The ANBU-nin quickly jumped next to the boy and grabbed him and tried to jump away, but the boy was struggling, and trying to break free from her grip, so she had no other choice. She made the tiger seal and whispered: ˝Nehan Shöja no Jutsu.˝ the boy looked up and saw white feathers falling from the sky, slowly forcing his eyes to close, before he totally fell asleep. She put his limp body under her arm and jumped away. After safely landing she gave the boy who was under genjutsu to a chunnin, which then under her instructions ran with the boy to a safe house.
´Iruka...´
The third Hokage stood by the corpse.
˝I promise to look after your son, and thank you for contributing in protecting the Leaf village. You shall forever be in our hearts. ˝ he bent down and closed the opened eyes of the mother.
Another loud roar was heard as the destruction continued. That snapped him out of his thoughts and he saw a house falling down on him that was thrown away from under the beasts feet.
˝Lord Third! ˝ the three ANBU-nins yelled
The house crushed the corpse of the mother underneath it, as the Hokage barely managed to dodge it. The three ninjas sighed in relief.
˝You can´t kill me just yet you damn fox. ˝
˝Please watch yourself better Lord Third. If we lose you, fighting this battle will be useless. ˝ The ANBU squad captain lectured the Hokage. The Third took one last glance at the destroyed house of the once happy family before jumping away in silence.
´where the hell is Minato?!´
˝Lord Third! ˝ Another ANBU-nin joined his squad to relay information. ˝The Akimichi and the Inuzuka are ready to launch a counterattack! ˝
˝Good! Captain Puma! ˝ he looked towards the captain of his personal ANBU squad. ˝I will go assist the counterattack while you take the rest of the team to Shikaku and discuss the next move! ˝
˝Affirmative, sir! ˝ Answered the captain with a puma patterned ANBU mask. The captain and his team used some chakra on their feet to make a boosted jump towards the Nara planner.
The Hokage then stopped in his tracks and bit his thumb and made it bleed, before he made a series of hand signs: ˝I, Inu, Tori, Saru, Hitsuji (boar, dog, bird, monkey, ram)! ˝ before slamming the palm of his hand on the ground ˝ Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Enköö Enma! ˝
A large cloud of white smoke appeared, and in it the thirds summoning. His body and tail were covered in fur, which protrude from his sleeves and pants. His long white hair reached into his back, with sideburns and a goatee on his face. He wore a black suit with mesh armor underneath, a sleeveless kimono shirt with white fur trimmings, with markings of tiger stripes which was held closed by a sash. He was wearing a konoha head protector.
˝You called Hiruzen? ˝ The monkey asked sarcastically.
˝Enma, now is not the time for sarcasm! Konoha is under attack by the Kyuubi! ˝
˝Kyuubi?! Wasn´t he sealed inside that Kushina? ˝
˝Something must´ve happened at the birth! Quickly now! I need the staff to go help the others with the counterattack! ˝
˝Understood. Henge: Kongönyoi! ˝
The monkey king transformed into a black staff with a golden color on each end, and became as hard as diamonds.
˝Good. ˝ The third picked up the staff and jumped straight towards the center of destruction, right in front of the fox. ˝Commence the counterattack! ˝ he yelled before he swung the staff and hit the fox in the face.
FLASHBACK NO JUTSU!
A beautiful redheaded woman already high in her pregnancy was walking down the streets of Konoha, people here and there were bowing down to and greeted with smiles on their faces. It was supposed to be the happiest day of her life.
˝Ohhh! Kushina-chan! ˝
A fair-skinned woman with long black hair wearing a purple blouse with a red and white fan on the back waved at the redhead.
˝Mikoto-chan! Long time no see! ˝ kushina exclaimed happily. The two delved into small talk, before the soon to be mother was pulled away by Biwako Sarutobi-the wife of the Third Hokage.
˝We have to get going Kushina. ˝ said the old lady, with some irritation heard in her voice.
˝Hai, hai, I´m going. That´s how it is, so see you later Mikoto-chan! ˝
˝Yes, be safe! ˝ the Uchiha kunoichi waved at them until she couldn´t see them anymore.
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˝Okay Kushina. I´m going to pour my chakra into the seal, to help you restrain the Kyuubi, so you don´t have to worry about him escaping and give your all into pushing. ˝ Nervously said the current-fourth Hokage-Minato Namikaze, aka the yellow flash of Konoha.
˝Huff, huff, huff...Hngrh! do you have any idea how hard this is?! ˝ she crushed the brick when she squeezed her hand. That brick was meant to divert her attention from the pain with squeezing it as hard as she could. Seeing his wife crush the brick with sheer force sent shivers down the Hokages spine.
˝No I don´t, and I hope I never have to find out. ˝ he sweat dropped.
Just moments later a small cry could be heard. The younger of the two Medic-nins cleaned the baby and took him to his father and mother. The child had three whiskers on each cheek, azure eyes and hair as red as blood.
˝Naruto... ˝ Smiled the still huffing mother. ˝...his hair is just as mine. ˝
˝He is beautiful˝ said the Medic- nin who was still holding him.
˝He´s got my eyes˝ said Minato, eyes full of tears of joy.
˝Here comes the other one! ˝ exclaimed the Medic-nin who was still in the middle of Kushinas legs.
˝Just one more push Kushina-sama! ˝
˝Arghagh! ˝
˝She is out! ˝ Joyfully said the older Medic-nin as she brought the other child to Kushina and Minato.
˝Mito... ˝ Kushina straddled through the boys and the girls hair. Her hair was as yellow as her fathers, her eyes were deep purple. Minato and Kushina hugged both of their children, crying their eyes out from happiness. But. That happiness didn´t last long. A masked man appeared and took Naruto hostage.
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FLASHBACK NO JUTSU, RELEASE!
˝...there is no other way, Kushina! Reaper death seal! ˝
˝No! You mustn´t do this to our own children! Minato! ˝
He stopped listening to her and did what he thought was right. To save the village, even if he had to put such a high burden on his own children. Firstly he sealed half of the demon fox in the younger child-the sister, and then he sealed half of the chakra in himself. Or at least that´s what he thought. Both parts of the monster were sealed into the young Naruto. Mito only got a quarter of the beasts power, while most of the body was drawn to the boy and wanted to reside there.
˝Wha...What´s this?! ˝ He said, surprised.
˝What´s wrong Minato? ˝
˝My chakra isn´t being sealed by the reaper! ˝
Kushina was shocked, and then she came to a realization. ˝My chakra too! It isn´t fading away! I should´ve died by now yet I´m still alive! ˝.
˝Do you know what this means Kushina. Maybe the gods took pity on us and gave us a chance to live a happy life. ˝
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˝Hey Chungo...isn´t that the fourth Hokage? ˝
˝Yes Chikuma...it is˝
Two bounty hunters were hiding in nearby bushes.
˝Did you know he had children?! ˝ asked Chungo, puzzled.
˝No... ˝
˝This is a great chance. If we kidnap a child of the fourth Hokage- of the Namikaze clan... ˝
˝We could be filthy fucking rich after we sell him˝
The two looked at each other and jumped out of hiding, running in high speed straight towards the red-haired newborn.
˝Minato! Behind you! ˝ yelled Kushina, but she was a little too late. One of the bounty hunters grabbed the child and boosted his running speed with chakra, while the other threw a smoke bomb to blind Minato, and then joined his partner in the escape.
˝Shit, not enough chakra to go after them. ˝ Minato didn´t have any chakra left. He could barely move. The only thing they could do is only watch as their newborn son was being taken away a second time right from under their noses. Kushina immediately broke down, while Minato looked at the ground ashamed, that he couldn´t help his child.
˝NOOOO! Narutoooo! ˝ yelled the red-haired mother.
A few moments later the third Hokage arrived at the scene right next to his successor.
˝Minato! Where is the damn fox! ˝ he saw the sad face of Minato and the crying Kushina.
˝What the hell happened here? ˝
Minato then quicky explained to the third Hokage everything that happened and how his child was kidnapped. The Third quickly dispatched the ANBU in the area, to search for the kidnappers and the son. They searched and searched, even using summons to try and sniff the culprits out, but to no awail. The kidnappers were professionals and covered their tracks so good that even the ANBU couldn´t find them. Minato and Kushina lost all hope, and were hugging their only child-the child that was left, in tears, tears of sorrow and pain. After the event Minato made sure, that his daughter was known as the real hero of Konoha, for sacrificing herself by having the Kyuubi sealed in her. All of the shinobi and civilians agreed with their leader-the Hokage, for them Mito was now a princess, and she was treated that way. He never told anyone else about his kidnapped firstborn, who was presumed dead by the Third. The ANBU, that were searching for the boy swore that they would never tell anyone. He had to take such a precaution so that a certain ninja in charge of ROOT, would not use this as an excuse to question Minatos competence about being a Hokage, and try to take away his seat and become the Hokage himself. The ANBU continued searching for the boy for about six months before the Hokage finally decided to give up on finding him. Those were sad days for the Namikaze family. They mourned for the lost son for a long time, before Kushina and Minato decided, that being depressed isn´t going to help. They will move on and live their lives happily with Mito.
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Five years after the attack of the Kyuubi on Konoha
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Kagami Uchiha and his wife Maaya Uchiha were arriving at Konoha with their son Shisui from a visit to Sunagakure in the dead of the night, only the moon was lighting their path towards the gates of Konohagakure. All of them had similar traits-brown hair, dark eyes and a defined face. The father was wearing the standard Uchiha uniform with black pants, while the mother was wearing a white tunic with flowers sewed on. The son was wearing a black short-sleeved shirt and brown pants. They were talking, and laughing, until the trio stopped in their tracks from the sight of a red-haired boy with torn black clothes and barefoot, swaying left and right as he was walking towards the giant gates. *Thud* the boy fell face first to the ground. He could barely stand back up. He continued swaying, again and again and again as he was walking forward. The Uchiha family quickly ran towards the child, trying to help him.
˝hey boy. Are you alright? What is your name? ˝ asked Maaya Uchiha, out of concern.
The boy didn´t respond and continued walking towards the gates, so she reached out to him, and tried to turn him towards them.
*slap* the red-haired boy slapped away her hand ˝Don´t touch me! Huff, huff, huff. ˝
He jumped about a meter away from the family, huffing like crazy, clearly exhausted. He was pale and malnourished, his ribcage clearly visible under his almost torn shirt, his smooth, red as blood hair was long, long enough to cover his eyes and it ran straight to the bottom of his nose. ˝ you are definitely going to hurt me, just like them! ˝ the boy screamed.
The Uchihas were shocked. What could have happened to this boy, who looks very young, to be this scared of everyone. They saw traces of blood on his torn clothes and blood streaming down out of his covered eyes , like tears.
˝Calm down young man, no need to be afraid, we mean you no harm. ˝ the father-Kagami was trying to calm the boy down as best he could, but with no luck. It only pissed him off further, and he was preparing to make a run for it. ˝Dear, he will probably only listen to someone closer to his own age, seeing as how he is scared of us, adults. ˝ whispered Maaya to her husband. He nodded and showed Shisui to take the lead. Shisui slowly started approaching the boy. ˝No worries. We won´t hurt you, I promise. We will take care of you, and heal you. Is that okay? ˝ the redheaded boy didn´t lower his guard. Then his stomach growled. Shisui smiled at the boy. ˝you must be hungry, right? ˝
The boy nodded, slowly letting his guard down. ˝we have lots and lots of food home, and don´t mind sharing it with you over dinner, but you have to trust us. ˝ the boys stomach growled louder.
˝You promise not to hurt me? ˝
˝We promise. Right mom, dad! ˝
˝Yes, we swear! ˝
When they said that the boy relaxed his posture little bit. Suddenly the red-haired boy fell to his knees and coughed up a puddle of blood. ˝Hey are you alright! Where does it hurt you?! ˝ the parents quickly ran up to the boy and helped him stand back up. When he was stood up, his hair swayed to the right side of his face, revealing the once covered left eye, while the other was still hidden. The revealed eye shocked the Uchiha.
˝T...This is! ˝
˝What´s wrong˝ nervously asked the red-haired boy.
Nobody could answer. They all starred in awe. The mother gently moved the boys red hair from his face, revealing the same right eye.
Blood red eyes with four tomoe in each one and blood gushing out of both, falling down his whiskered cheeks and onto the ground.