Title – The Soviet Union's New House (commonly abbreviated to TSUNH)
Started – 6-7-10
Finished – ?
Characters – USSR family; Ivan/Russia, Natalia/Belarus, Yekaterina/Ukraine, Toris/Lithuania, Eduard/Estonia, Raivis/Latvia, and others
Genre – Horror (my first attempt)
Rating – T
Upfront Summary [the summary that shows up with all the other information before you click on to read the story] = This was the 'family' Ivan often referred to. It was comprised of the two opposite sisters; the head, Ivan; and Toris, Raivis, and Eduard as the lowly servants. The other they would learn of soon enough. Horror AU.
IMPORTANT!A/N - Woot! It's finally done! 7 days of uploading for Hetalia Day! T.T Gosh, it was so troublesome... I think I emptied out my entire storage of stories... *groan* Now I actually have to work on uploading each of them, like, once a month! Yeesh...*several groans* And I've got an SAT I was studying for, but, but...that can only put me off for so long. ^^; Ah well. I seemed to get a lot of reviews. A lot of random favoriting and alerting. I'm...relatively happy. ^^~ So enjoy the crème de la crème upload! The soup de jour! Mwah!
A/N – The one that's been haunting me for quite some time! I mean, just look at the date this thing was started! XO And I still haven't made much progress on the story… *shrug* Just wanted to upload it for you guys. Tell me what you think, kay!
Just in case, here's a small key:
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"Dialogue"
Thoughts/Emphasis/Whispering/Non-English/Songlyrics
EMPHASIS/LOUD
Narration
'So-called'
Disclaimer = I do not own Axis Powers: Hetalia/APH. Hidekaz Himaruya does. If I did, I'd clarify the whole "What is Canada to France?" debate. Seriously, is he his son? Because if THAT'S true, then that'd make the Italian brothers his uncle! America's too! O.O
Well guys, this took a lot of guts and many sleepless nights and class time to write, so I seriously hope I get like…scholarly responses from this! (I had a dream that I got a full scholarship to UCLA by writing this and, and, ohhhh…what wishful thinking…)
~~~(Prologue)~~~
They decided to move.
It wasn't that they weren't doing well; the economy was fine and crops were growing properly as crops could grow in constant snowy weather. Nevertheless, this change was absolutely necessary.
Moscow was a busy city and Ivan was honestly looking forward to Arsen'ev. It was a quiet Southern town he had heard. The slower pace would be sure to move the family in the right direction.
"It's desolate and totally boring here," declared Feliks.
"Hey now, we're not even there yet," sounded Toris, hoping that his master didn't hear his remark (as fruitless as that would prove to be). "It's not like you're staying with us anyway."
The Polish man scoffed loudly. "I wouldn't dream of it, Tori!" Feliks switched onto a lower gear as the Ezilon van decelerated into town. "If it weren't for you, I wouldn't have offered to be you guys' escort."
Then the man smirked and added, "Even if Mr. Braginski got down on his hands and knees I wouldn't." Eduard, the young man with glasses seated in the middle of the back row leaned forward to tug on the driver's sleeve as a warning, but Feliks continued driving without so much as a glance.
Eduard returned to his previous position with a hand petting his low-on-battery Mac Book Pro. The Estonian glanced around the van. To his right was the fidgety Latvian, Raivis. He was never one to handle change well – or Ivan – so Eduard knew that the move would be difficult for the small boy.
Speaking of Ivan, he sat on Eduard's left, staring out the car window as if there was something to look at; he was an unusual individual. Their boss.
Using his laptop's screen's reflection, the man checked on Ivan's sisters in the rear row. Natalia, the youngest, sat behind Ivan, watching him intently, and Yekaterina, the eldest, sat with a simple face behind Raivis.
This was the 'family' Ivan often referred to. It was comprised of the two opposite sisters; the head, Ivan; and Toris, Raivis, and himself as the lowly servants.
The car stopped abruptly causing everyone to jolt forwards from their seats and Eduard's laptop nearly flying.
It was then that Eduard noted, quite venomously, how much of a poser that Polish man was. The brainiac was puzzled as to why he wanted their demeaning role, especially since it meant being under Ivan night and day, but he was glad that Feliks was not of the same Baltic blood. Whatever Toris found so amiable in the man was beyond him…
"We're here!" Ivan exclaimed as he leapt out of the car and slammed the door, not noticing Natalia on his tail.
DOK
"Oh!" Toris turned from his shot gun seat and apologetically motioned towards the girl as he noticed the slight red on her forehead. "Are you alright?"
He lifted a hand to soothe her only to have it slapped away in an instant.
"Do not touch me," Natalia said dismissively before harshly opening the car door herself and leaving the Lithuanian with nothing to build on.
The house had large intimidating black gates with a desert-like front yard. As Feliks locked the car and joined the group, he nodded to himself.
Ivan was the first to approach. He spent a few agonizing moments looking for the lock on the gate before fishing out its key from his pocket; it shone in the sunlight.
Ivan smiled. "Welcome home." He inserted the key, turned the handle, and pushed the gate inside.
A huge gust of air escaped, whipping at their faces, and an instant feeling of regret was cast over the group, but Ivan was too blind.
This is…home?
~()~
*Arsen'ev – A town down south of Russia; it lies almost at the borders of that and China.
*Ezilon – A Polish car/van
*Yekaterina – In here (and most other places) I use Ukraine's fanon name as provided from Hetalia Wikia which is Yekaterina Katyusha Braginski. A lot of other people use Katyusha as a first name, but I think Yekaterina sounds prettier. ~^.^~
A/N - Like? Don't like? At least REVIEW around the same time you favorite or alert me/the story! XO
~TMRomance
PS – By the -freaking- way, this horror story is based off of a real story. Yeah, doesn't that always make you more scared when you read that on the back of the DVD? Yeah. Oh, and the real story…it's my house. This story is based off of a happening in MY HOUSE. *shiver* It's for this reason that Mango (best friend) and I have decided to make a movie reenacting of the story…since we have the setting. *shifty eyes* Yeah, don't ask. Unless you live in California and you'd like to be in it. *hides under covers* *comes out* In that case feel free to ask because we need as many people as we can get. *hides again* *sees IT* *shrieks*