Hades/Persephone
I have for some reason fallen in love with Hades/Persephone for a few minutes maybe hours so I took advantage of that to create my first story. I'm thinking about continuing but I need at least 1 review. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Flames accepted since they'll help me become a better writer.
Persephone, the beautiful queen of the underworld, was in her and Hade's bedroom sitting on the blood red bed, frowning with her arms crossed. Suddenly Hades opened the door and walked in and saw how sad his wife was.
"What's wrong, dear?" he asked worried. But Persephone turned away from him, but not soon enough because Lord Hades saw the tear that trickled down her cheek. He sat beside her and cupped her chin with his hand and made her look at him. As soon as she saw his dark eyes and angelic features (she hated when people thought he was supposed to look like he looked in the movie "Hercules") she broke down crying, he pulled her into his embrace and she started sobbing uncontrollably into his shoulder.
He asked again "what's wrong, dear?" She was calm enough to splutter out the words that broke the God of the underworld's heart "You don't love me anymore!" some think that Persephone stays with Hades because she was forced since she ate the pomegranate seeds but in truth she actually does love him, with all her heart.
"What!" he roared. "Of course I love you, why would you ever think otherwise!" Hades really didn't understand. What gave her such an absurd idea?
Persephone continued crying "ever since you met that Maria character you never even have second thoughts about me, even after more than 70 years after her death you're still mourning over her!" she whispered the last part " face it, you just don't love me".
And more tears fell from her eyes. Hades stood up and his arms went slack by his side. His wife actually thought he didn't love her?
"Persephone," he started "you know mortals, sometimes there is a mortal that you love but trust me I won't love her forever, it's just that…" but he was at a loss for words, what was god and mortal love? But then he found what he was looking for and knelt in front of her "it will pass" apparently that wasn't the right thing to say. "IT WILL PASS? When?" She asked hysterically.
That was when Hades realized he still loved Maria, but he loved Persephone much more. And so he was able to answer her question. Hades said, "It just did." He grabbed his wife and kissed her with as much passion as he could. Persephone melted in his arms, the scene was cheesy but they were alive before it the word cheesy was even used so it doesn't matter, she knew he wasn't lying and kissed him back. They fell on the bed and the rest is best left unsaid. But they knew they loved each other.
Should Persephone get pregnant with her and Hades first child? if yes what gender should it be and name suggestions appreciated. and PLEASE tell me if i'm horrible.
