A/N:
I have asked a person to help with the presentation of the story as well as help with the grammatical errors... If you want to read something that won't hurt your feelings towards naruto manga than you are at right place...and these few chapters will be expanded with lot of filling material as soon as that particular person finds time...
Those who don't review... I understand your feelings... I myself have reviewed only one story and that is perhaps the most promising naruto fanfiction on the site... but if you want to talk about naruto world and logically question on jutsus and stuff... i am the best person and i mean it...
I have no idea how long the story will be but I have a mental picture of how I want the story to first few chapters are short and They are up on expansion but I will ask you to reach at least chapter 3 when it's available...
As all the other authors on this site. I don't own Naruto
italic sub conscious thoughts of Kensha
AM I DREAMING
I don't know how to put it into words, but this feeling... I feel a change... Even with my eyes closed, it feels like the world around me is not same. No. . I am not falling into that again... World is not mysterious... Open your eyes damn Kensha..
I am Kensha. And that's all I know at the present moment. And even about that I am not completely sure. I found myself 4000 heartbeats ago here in this forest... Even though this looks like a normal forest. My instinct say that something is very odd... like it is not reality. Or where I used to live wasn't, compared to this place.
Come on. You are being philosophical once again... stop it... remember the rules. The rules. Don't be illogical.
My body feels like I have been sleeping for years... like I have stopped using it long ago... or perhaps I think this body is used for the first time.
Logic rules the world... you are weak alone. Find help...
Yeah...help... that is what I am doing now... finding any life...other than the plants and animals...I am walking for approximately 720 heartbeats now. But I think my heart is beating not at the usual rate and therefore I couldn't convert it into how much time in seconds... yet it gives me a vague estimate of passage of time...
But i am happy about one particular thing... I am practically a kid now... I am a kid...come on... This is what everybody wishes... to be kid again... and I have full teenage to live with this maturity...
Stop smiling Kensha... are you sure you will be alive here for your whole teenage...
I don't know whether everyone else have this kind of program in mind that keep giving you suggestions from time to time or not.. But I have it. And I am not really happy about it. It is like invading my privacy... I can't even think alone. Can't cry because it says ' Kensha. World is based on logic. Crying only wastes time'. But it has saved me from suicide from many times... because it gives me hope that I am not the worst. Yet I am trying continuously to get rid of it...
I am guessing it Kensha. Just guess... these toads. They are not just staring out of curiosity. And we haven't seen this much variety of toads even in encyclopedia. This place is full of toads.
Don't tell me I have to run away from toads now. I am already much into pain from walking. And being nude from head to toe doesn't help a bit. And the wind... it's like a refrigerator is opened in front of me when I am wet from head to toe.
Keep walking... Don't you think it is very boring to just fall here... It is not very interesting thing to do..
Yeah. I will wait for something to happen. May be those toads have some link... I have a faint memory of some character Jiraya of Japanese mythology who summoned toads by magic...
Come on get out of it... You have left all that years ago. Remember how much you destroyed yourself for some idiotic comic series... It destroyed your career and your social life ..
Hey... I am not obsessed with it now . It is just a memory... and It is not completely illogical...
Yet I don't think that is possible... and even if it is... I don't want you to get pulled again. Better die rather than restarting all over again...
Come on get out of my head. Are you me or just some parasite designed to irritate me...
Of course. It is me. Our interests are same. Only it takes care that I don't fall into problems again...And It is more decisive than me...
Okay. I too think we are not in the world we used to be... That toad. It is holding a stick. It must be that world only. I remember.. it was very important character. And helped the protagonist.
I covered my privates with hands. I have read enough comics in my childhood. And one thing I am sure that they take shape of anything to everything and then suddenly come out into human form. The idea of being exposed, Is simply very disgraceful...
"Who are you and what are you doing on land of toads"
I looked at the source of sound... I heard it from behind... something told me that I should look down at the ground rather than searching for a human.
Okay. Now adapt quickly. This is naruto world... you should have kept one copy with you. Now we are in deep shit... My head is hurting... I had spent years in creating a life for you and now you fell into another world...
Come on. I though you were calm and logical one... This is out of character...
Rules...yeah...don't leave your present unanalyzed...that toad.I remembers it is good one. Talk to it.
"I am Kensha. I don't know how I reached h-here... but I w-wish to get knowledge about where I am and how I can find my way -he-home..."
Well. I always had a speech problem used to stutter a lot. And even now I can't stop it... Though the cold will give that toad a reason to belief that I am not stuttering out of low confidence.
"You will get cold if you keep standing here... We will talk at a better place"
The pink purple talking toad turned... and I followed her...
At least show some surprise at a toad talking...you have created suspicion...
Damn...what do I do...oh yes...get fainted. And tell later that I got surprised by a toad .it is not difficult to do. Just relax your body. And close your eyes. And fall slowly...and someone would catch you. And I executed the fainting program... and was waiting for someone to catch.
Ouch...
Idiot...
I know...
(XXX)
Hope you will tell me how I can make it better...it's my first story...I have many chapters drafted but my writing skills suck that's why i am waiting for reviews to decide further whether to upload or not...
