The Final Bout

She enters, darkness sweeps around

Shadows engulfing everything

When suddenly, a painful sound

She hears, but eyes see nothing.

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Before her, lo! Sweet face of he

Who held her heart, but now instead

A chill of fear swept down as she

Realized he was nearly dead.

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Far off, vile laughter, crimson hue

Surrounds that wicked, evil form

Of a boy she once loved and knew

More powerful than the norm.

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Fear, turned to rage, rises inside

These feelings, this pain, cannot hide.

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Beside, a glint that caught her eye

Her hand drew nearer as it bade

That deadly weapon just nearby,

The hilt of that silver blade.

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The handle icy in her grasp,

She sways and staggers to her feet

Her mind set on this noble task,

And then their gazes did meet.

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Both understand without a word

This battle predestined by Fate

Thoughts, reasons, distorted and blurred

Replaced with untainted hate.

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Screams of family, they cannot hear

They charge, cries fill and chill the air.

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An instant flash, deafening roar

That quakes and quivers through the walls

They crouch in stance, aching for more,

When one at last cries out and falls.

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Silence hovers and darkness fades,

A girl with ocean eyes cries out

Hatred, vengeance, auras, and blades

End now with this final bout.

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All forgiveness drained from her heart,

She turned to the killer and said,

With sisterhood slain, they must part

Now that her brother was dead.

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Once friends, now foes, she's all alone

Now cold's her smile with eyes of stone.


Author's Comments: For those of you who know me, this is straight out ofsophomore year's planner, with a few modifications. This is boredom in language arts at it's best. We just so happened to be learning about Shakespearean sonnets at the time. I made up my own version of iambic pentameter here, since 10 syllables per line are hard. Instead, there are 8 in every lineexcept forthe last in each quatrain (group of 4 lines), which are 7. The couplets are also 8 each.

This is a scene from the final battle in my fic, Secrets, Promises, and Lies. Considering I wrote this before writing the actual scene in the story, there are a few details that may be inaccurate. If it's hard to tell what's going on, then either you haven't read it, or have a bad memory. I'm not about to admit that I'm just bad at poetry, you see. I hope you all liked it. Comments, both favorable and constructive, are welcome. And if you haven't read SPAL, I really suggest you do, because it's pretty good, from what I hear from my fans.