my first fan-fic! probably rubbish but review and tell me what you think

Cammie

I wandered through the streets in Roseville, Virginia. I had been given the address where a circle operative was supposedly hiding. As I approached the targets house, I heard footsteps behind me. "Cammie," a voice asked, "what are you doing here?"

It was Josh Abrams. "Oh hi, it's been a while since I last saw you. How's it going?"

"Why don't you come in for a cup of tea and we'll catch up?" I followed him to the address I had been given, wondering why I needed to investigate here. I thought of Zach. He'd be jealous of 'Jimmy' as Zach insisted in calling josh, my ex-boyfriend.

"So what are you doing these days cam?" Josh said as he poured the kettle.

"I work for the government," I replied.

''Oh cool,'' Josh gave me my tea, "I'm in the family business, you know, the pharmacy.''

I drank my tea... Everything faded away. The tea, the address, everything began to fit together as I slipped away.

Zach

I stared at the photo of me, Cammie and our daughter, Morgan. I missed her. I hate it when she goes on solo missions, but I know she's a good spy and always comes home. I'd heard the girls giggling while talking to Cammie yesterday. I was trying to work out what Cammie wasn't telling me. Ah well she will tell me this afternoon when she Skypes me.

Then Bex walked in, crying. ''Zach,'' she sobbed, ''we need to talk.''

Rebecca Baxter never cried. What on earth could be so serious?

"Go on. What's happened?"

"It's Cammie,"

I got a sick feeling in my stomach, "go on"

"She's missing. Gone. Not there. Ohhhhh..."

''No'' I gasped

''And worse."

What could be worse than my Gallagher girl going missing? It was high school summer all over again. I couldn't lose her. Not again.

"She's pregnant." bex announced.

I never cried. It was a rule. I was the strong one. Yet I couldn't help the tears that rolled down my cheeks.

an- please review and tell me what you think. hope to update by the weekend.

-gertrude (not my real name)