This is my first story, so be nice! Although, any constructive criticism or help ful comments will not be shunned.
=P prepare for adventure.
As I walk down the leaf colored road, to church, I wonder. Wonder about how my life could get any worse. I shouldn't really be such a pity, but.. 'because I'm the church kid, so everybody thinks I sit there and pray all day long, but, the worst of them all is the twins. Their moms cut their hair on the wrong setting, thinking it was fine, and balded them! I call them the bald headed babies. And Amanda Sweet, she got bit in the leg by a venipede, and now she always has her mouth like she tasted something bad. anyway, My mom tells me the town used to be bustling with people, the town of aspertia, but then, some kids went off to defeat team plasma,and, My big brother, and one of my only friends, was one of them.I had no Pokemon to keep me company either, and my mother was always too busy to spend time with me. I thought my life was ruined, untill I met Dixie.
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Then, I saw the store, and decided to go inside, then I saw some pretty round men chasing after something, it appeared to run on four legs, and it stopped about 5 or 6 feet in front of me. It was a lillipup, and it looked at me expectantly. The men were workers of the store, and they were screaming, "No Pokemon allowed!" at it. I saw the Pokemon had a collar, and It said Lilli Dixie. The men stopped in front of me, and a bigger man walked up and said, "Do you own this Pokemon?" I replied shakily, "Uh-er-yup. I 'll get him out fast-" "Then call him! 'stupid pokemon trainers' the man thought. I stepped away from him hesitantly, and said "here Lilli Dixie!" to no prevail, after saying it for the third time, I muttered, "Please Dixie, come with me, It's not okay here." Lilli Dixie, who by now I call Lilli, or Dixie, walks up hesitantly, then he jumps up into my arms,and I knew, as he snuggled into my arms, that we were going to be best pals.
_Buh,bam! pretty good summary, if I do say so myself. Please review, give any good,or bad word, and, yea, sorry if this was a short summary, too. Later.