Hello, White Luna Chan here. I love pokemon and yaoi ( fluffy yaoi!) sand i thought " Why not make a green x red fan fiction that is sad and romantic and fluffy and everything good!". I will not mind if you choose to tell me that something is incorrect about my writing. You are simply critiquing my writing piece in hope to make it better. There is a difference between flame and constructive criticism though, flame is like " OMG! U RIGHT YAOI. U R SOOO DISGUSTING! I H8 U! U MUST B GAY URSELF!". Constructive criticism is were you calmly tell the author what is wrong with the piece and how they should fix it. Any flames on this writing piece will be ignored and put off as idiocy.
Disclaimer: I do not own pokemon, red or green.
Quiet, that's how it was on Mount Silver. The only noises were the howling winds and wild pokemon trying to find food in this snowy hell. Red's voice was never part of the noises, he decided that. Instead of having to deal with the awkwardness of certain words, like I love you, he decided not to talk at all.
Now, you are probably wondering " Why is Red, pokemon master of the world, here?" Well, he came here to train... and escape. He came on this mountain to escape from his best friend, Green. Red stripped him of his title of pokemon master. Green didn't even get ten minutes of fame until Red stole it. Well, that was how Green saw it.
Red didn't mean to, of corse, he just wanted to be the pokemon master, too. After he won, life went to crap for Green, and the two haven't spoken since...
Until now...
I know it's short, but that is how I want it to be. ( I'm also kinda suffering from writers block :( ) I feel as if this story should be should take small steps, let it evovle in to something new (pun intended ). I'll try and update soon... good bye!
White Luna Chan