No Girls Allowed
Ash Kele
Ok so I was re-reading my Story No Girls Allowed and I was all like. 'what the hell am I reading?' then I realized...that version of the story sucked majorly. So I tore it down, ripped it to shreds and re-did it into a awesome, better story. There are some things that I'm keeping from the 'original' story and original plot line but some of the utter crap I put in the other story I just threw away cos it was confusing and utterly stupid. Hopefully this story is going to be clearer and easier to read. Hopefully it's gonna get to the point quicker too and I can catch some of the horrible mistakes I put in and make this story a bit more fun to read instead of killing the brain cells and hurting people's heads. I found like a bunch of other versions of NGA that I wrote and they had some good things in there too so there will be ideas from my other versions of the story in this one too.
Anyway. Enjoy the story.
~3 Ash Kele and The Daniels and Kele Co.
Chapter 1: It all started with a swing.
You see it's always been a long lived feud, who's better, boys or girls? Kids and even some adults have argued this for a long time, at one time in our life, boys were considered better than girls. But soon, girls started to hate not being able to do anything but cook and clean and be a house wife, stay-at-home-mom, and other things. The girls revolted and got the rights they wanted.
But kids have been the bitter ones to enforce the who's better than who. Especially in Gallagher Elementary School.
They even separated the playground between boys and girls, and it happened to be the wrong day for one girl to have the urge to swing on the swings...
"No don't do it, they'll yell at you." One girl cried holding a black haired girl's arm
"But I really, really wanna swing" the black haired girl whined
the girl reluctantly let the black haired girl's arm go and frowned "Be careful, ok?" the girl asked.
The black haired girl nodded and skipped over to the boys side. She was stopped mid way by two boys.
"What do you want?" one boy asked sternly
"I wanna swing, let me through." the black haired girl snapped then pushed through the boys and onto boy territory.
The girls gasped from their view from the front of the jungle gym.
The deeper the black haired girl went into the boy's side of the playground the more scared she got, the more boys she saw, the more her mind said "run back." The black haired girl bit her lip. She didn't expect the boys to let her this far through, they would have stopped her by now.
'Are they testing me?' the Black haired girl thought. She stuffed her hand in her jean pockets as she stopped in front of the swings. The boy's king sat there swinging.
The girl coughed in her hand, to get the boy king's attention. The boy king abruptly stopped swinging and glared
"What do you want, matter of fact what are you doing here?" the boy snapped
"I've come to swing." the black haired girl stated.
The boy smirked and hopped off the swing and walked up to the girl.
"I've come to swing." the king mocked "Why should we let you play on our swings?" the king said walking up to the girl with a threatening step.
"B-because I asked and you can't go against the treaty, remember." the black haired girl stuttered.
"I'm not letting some weak, lousy, stupid, dependent, ugly girl onto our swings just because she asks, I say we destroy the treaty an have it our way the way we want it!" the king cried then he pushed the black haired girl to the ground, making the boys surrounding her, laugh.
With tears in her eyes she lunged at the boy, making them both fall to the ground, they started fighting right there and didn't stop till a teacher broke them apart...
The girls and the boys ripped up the treaty...
and the feud went to an extreme high...
where one wrong word could start a whole fight...
what's worst..
the feud travels through the grades.
For all those who have read this before. I have re-wrote this whole story. sorry for making you guys wait so long only to have this smacked in your face. I will up load at least a chapter a day (Since it is winter break for me here in FL there for i have no excuse for being late.) any way please enjoy the story!