If you don't like it then please tell me how I could make it better.

And please read "All is fair in love and war".

Please review.

You're really funny Two-Bit said 7 year old Angel Mathews. Thanks said Two-Bit (Keith) Mathews, 8 years old.

Time to go Two-Bit said their dad as he loaded the last suitcase into the car.

I want u to stay Two-Bit said Angel as she hugged him. Don't worry Angel, well see each other again.

Then I wanna go with you Two-Bit.

Sorry Angel, but we need you to stay with mom and take care of her.

Fine, bye Two-Bit.

Bye my little devil.

Hey my name is Angel.

I am going to miss you said Two-bit as he climbed into the car.

Their father climbed into the front of the car and started it up. The car backed out of the drive way and left down the street.

She waved to Two-Bit till he turned the corner.

Her mom came out and hugged her.

I know you miss him, but he wrote you a letter for you when you can read.

Angel just cried until she fell asleep on her mother's lap on the front step.

I know it was short but I will put some on right now. Just thought it was a good place to end.