Zeolen
Chapter 1
" Help, there here there here," yelled a running villager. " Zack save the kid now and get far away from these terrible people" whined a short villager. After the villager said her last words a guy with a sword slashed off the poor elderly lady's neck. Blood was pouring out everywhere and then more came and they started chasing Zack trying to stab them with their swords. Zack was to fast for them he ran and ran until he reached a meadow where a young boy was playing. " Fox we need to leave this town there are people everywhere killing everyone in are village," Zack said yelling in frustration. " What, where is my mom?" said the young Fox. " She isn't here right now, she is hiding." Said Zack. " You are a dirty liar and I'm not going any where with you, I will go and find those knights and I will kill them." Said the young Fox. At that moment Fox ran and Zack just stayed there unsure what to do, Fox was running for a long time then he finally came to this house and he never saw anything like it in his life. The house was really big and the whole house was painted black, even the windows were painted black. Fox thought for a moment and he decided what he needed to do.
Fox went up too the door and he knocked. No answer. He knocked once again. Again there was no answer, so he tried to see if the door was unlocked, the door was unlocked so he went inside the dark and creepy house. Suddenly he heard a voice. " I have been waiting for your arrival Fox." Said a raspy voice. What's happening thought fox? I can't breath. Then Fox fell down to the ground and the dark figure walked over to the body and started to carry him into the dark basement.
Authors notes: I wonder what's going to happen to the poor little Fox. Well anyway I will have chapter 2 done soon. Send a lot of reviews.