hey , guys . This is my first fanfic . Please tell me if i am good or not. Please also ignore the grammatical errors .Enjoy!

- HICF

Halloween Night

Chapter 1 Invatation

"No Tyson."

"Pretty please"

" I said no ."

" Awwww , for 3 hrs. only Kai. Please."

"NO TYSON."

Ray winced as he heard Tyson trying to convince Kai to let them go to the Halloween Party at Demolition Boy's . Kai's sudden outburst had quiten down Tyson for a while , but Ray was 100% sure that Tyson would start moaning and crying that Kai was not letting them go to a party and stare at Kai with big puppy dog eyes . And Kai would lost it and give them punishment to do 100 push ups or 80 laps.

Befour any of this could happen Ray swiftly entered the room and digested the scene . Kai was sitting on the couch massaging his temples and Tyson was pouting and glaring at floor as if trying to bore a hole through it. Max was looking as though he was in between a really amusing tennis match. Ray saw Tyson giving him a look that clearly meant I wanna go!. Ray motioned him that I've got this.

He seated himself beside Kai .

" Umm, Kai?"

"Hn."

" Why dont you let us go ?"

Kai raised an eyebrow. Ray got second thoughts that he shoudn't have interfaired at all.

" Because I don't fucking believe you would be able to handle yourself ."

Tyson opened his mouth probably to tell Kai that he was big enough to handle himself, but Ray's glare and Max's smack on the arm quitened him down.

Kai sighed and said " Alright , but here is a catch ; you would be back by 10:30 sharp or you all have to sleep on the bench outside ."

Tyson's mouth hung open . He launched himself on the captain and hugged him so tightly as if Kai was his soul mate.

" Get off me Tyson ." Tyson got off , grinning stupidly.

But Ray had other thoughts , he leaned towards Kai and whispered "Why don't you come along to?"

Kai stared. " I mean ... in that case you would be able to keep an eye on us and make sure we reach home on time ." Ray suddenly thought that he had pushed Kai too much. He gulped and said "but if you don't wanna come than its fine."

"Fine. I will go with you"

Tyson cheered and Max whooped so loudly that Ray was pretty sure that they had woken up the entire hotel by now.

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- HICF